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Notice: This was in the Premium forum for the last week for initial thoughts. Now I'm sharing it with the rest of you.
Some of you could probably care less, but I think some may be interested in reading this.
Its the most recent essay we had to write in English 4, which is really English 1101 (dual-credit class also counting for college credit) we were to discuss a strong belief that we have and focus on what has made you feel that way over time. Note that the requirement was only 2-4 pages. This is 9 including the sources.
Let's just say that I feel the teacher grades way too harshly, as I've normally earned all A's or a high B on essays before this class. Since the beginning of the school year I have made two Cs, two Bs, and a single A on the five essays. This is the A. 97%. She even asked to use it as an example next year.
If anyone wishes to use part of this in their own essay or whatever, just ask for my permission and let me see what its in. Other use is considered plagiarism. Don't repost it anywhere, etc.
'Tis a Word document. If someone really needs an RTF version I can convert it.
Let me know what you think. I was re-reading it a minute ago and noticed a few errors here and there. I didn't bother fixing them or the things she pointed out in her comment boxes (not on this copy).
Enjoy, Premos. (and now everyone else)
Some of you could probably care less, but I think some may be interested in reading this.
Its the most recent essay we had to write in English 4, which is really English 1101 (dual-credit class also counting for college credit) we were to discuss a strong belief that we have and focus on what has made you feel that way over time. Note that the requirement was only 2-4 pages. This is 9 including the sources.
Let's just say that I feel the teacher grades way too harshly, as I've normally earned all A's or a high B on essays before this class. Since the beginning of the school year I have made two Cs, two Bs, and a single A on the five essays. This is the A. 97%. She even asked to use it as an example next year.
If anyone wishes to use part of this in their own essay or whatever, just ask for my permission and let me see what its in. Other use is considered plagiarism. Don't repost it anywhere, etc.
'Tis a Word document. If someone really needs an RTF version I can convert it.
Let me know what you think. I was re-reading it a minute ago and noticed a few errors here and there. I didn't bother fixing them or the things she pointed out in her comment boxes (not on this copy).
Enjoy, Premos. (and now everyone else)