gis-mo™ puck: The Official Thread. (My Class Assignment)

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Done.

If your relying on people to tell you when done to know who gets the prize your system is rather flawed. People will just wait.
 
haitch40
If your relying on people to tell you when done to know who gets the prize your system is rather flawed. People will just wait.
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It tells me when a new response is submitted, so I can verify who actually sent the response after they post on here that they did it right away.

Edit: 1 left till 25!!!
 
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Pretty good for a first try at a radio ad. The initial sound fx needs boosting (this catches people's attention to encourage them to take in the following message) and the vocals need to be more dynamic. Might think about a jingle or catchy call to action at the end as well next time. 👍

I had an interesting moment when I downloaded your link. It automatically loaded itself into iTunes and started to play. All OK, apart from the banging techno track which automatically followed it in the playlist. I thought it was part of the ad - WOW! :lol:

edit: Sorry if that sounded over-critical, it wasn't supposed to be. I produce advertising campaigns which cover all media so I'm probably the worst person who could have had a listen. ;)
 
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Done it aswell.

I put as other notes that if you try expanding your range to footballs. I would buy one of those if it said how fast you scored.


EDIT: Oh, realised you have got all of them that you need.

Nice advert, could do with being slightly more ear catching and memorable. Also the voice could stand out a little more. But apart from that it was good. I've heard worse ones on national radio.
 
axletramp
Pretty good for a first try at a radio ad. The initial sound fx needs boosting (this catches people's attention to encourage them to take in the following message) and the vocals need to be more dynamic. Might think about a jingle or catchy call to action at the end as well next time. 👍

I had an interesting moment when I downloaded your link. It automatically loaded itself into iTunes and started to play. All OK, apart from the banging techno track which automatically followed it in the playlist. I thought it was part of the ad - WOW! :lol:

edit: Sorry if that sounded oevr-critical, it wasn't supposed to be. I produce advertising campaigns which cover all media so I'm probably the worst person who could have had a listen. ;)
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lbsf1
Done it aswell.

I put as other notes that if you try expanding your range to footballs. I would buy one of those if it said how fast you scored.
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Thanks guys.

Yeah, I have some weird fear of recording my voice :lol:

Thanks for the advice, I'll use it in the future
 
Sorry for the bump guys (and gals), but I thought I should post the TV ad here that I made for the project.



What do you think?
 
I have my douuuubts about this one. Needs more mayo.
 
I think it's pretty good. Speech could be clearer maybe, and I had no time to read the last slide before the video ended. :)
 

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