Well. (I own that car IRL) From an editors standpoint, I really disliked the song you chose, (overplayed) but no biggy. I got the feeling that you weren't taking your car to edge, meaning, you could drift with a greater angle, and at a greater speed. Also, I didn't see that much feinting..which I guess is a matter of style, but it's a good way to drift a car like the EVO 6.
Good things, you didn't have an issue holding the drift, and looked like you had good control over the car. My final verdict is that as far as first vids come, it was pretty good. But, there is room to improve.
Some advice, slowly increase your entrance speed, and brake later. At the same time, play around with bringing the car to really extreme angles. Good job.