My first pics, criticism welcome

[dj_lockie]

well here are my first pics, criticise away:















well, their the better ones, anyway

 

[Mike Rotch]

Framing is good (except on first on ), just up the exposure a bit till it looks over-exposed on the TV screen.

 

[dj_lockie]

thanks, i'll keep that in mind, I liked the first one

 

[JayFlipz489]

Not a bad start...if you need any photos to 'take notes' on, come check out my gallery (I'm not saying I have the best, but I've had several 'best photos' comments from people in different forums)...

http://jayflipzgt4.photosite.com/contestgallery

 

[stevedave110]

not to bad..just like everyone else has said up th exposure.....first shot is tight..

 

[dj_lockie]

thanks, i'll keep the exposure in mind

 

[GTR-LT]

I think the rest of the guys are right just the exposure, but on the positive side I like the angles, I see what you were trying to do with the first shot, get the track and the direction in on it. Well Done.

Remember set your focus on the shot (what do you want the viewer to look at first?) and then build the shot from there...

Way to go! Keep it up!