Please remove this.

[rallymorten]

This was once a fanfic. Now, it's an empty space

 

[WTFnews]

thats a cool chapter, keep it up at this level and you got a reader for all your chapters

 

[rallymorten]

Thanks. Glad you like it 👍 not all chapters will be this long though, it was only this long because I couldn't find a place to break it

 

[WTFnews]

dude, trust me compared to others this is short but nice to read.

 

[rallymorten]

dude, trust me compared to others this is short but nice to read.

As I said, it's my first. I will surely get better you don't see any writers scoring a great award for their debut (unless it's something like debut of the year or similar)

 

[DK]

John Connor? That name seems familiar.

 

[rallymorten]

John Connor? That name seems familiar.

I don't know what you're talking about there are one or two smaller references already though

 

[ghskilla]

Very interesting, will definitely check on future chapters. 👍 Keep up the good job!

 

[rallymorten]

Finished Chapter 2 and added it to OP 👍 I'm working on chapter 3 right now, and I hope to have at least the next 3 ready for release before I go to my moms place (where I can't work that hard on it )

 

[Anathema]

Don't post it all in the OP, add it to a second post.

 

[Auraxir]

John Connor? That name seems familiar.

veeeeeery familiar

 

[rallymorten]

This is not worth ending, for 2 reasons:

1: the story might seem to repeat itself a little later
2: you're not even focused on the story but more on the name of the driver

If the mods want they can send this thread somewhere haunted

 

[WTFnews]

nice but repeating

 

[rallymorten]

nice but repeating

Sad but true. I was trying to make a story based on Race Driver 2. But it kinda gets very predictable. I might try something else though, you can call it an ace in my sleeve