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Since I tought Gran Turismo Fan Fictions were funny, I decided to make my own.
It will have a bit of everything, like racing, comedy, and serious things. But I want it to be interesting đź‘Ť

Follow the colours​

Black: Mizu Suzuki
Royal Blue: Keiji Suzuki
Yellow Green: Shingo Nakamura
Gray: Toshiro Suzuki
Note: When on a race, the colours match the colour of the car. Don't be confused! Also, when I mix colors, that means both people with those colors said the same thing at the same time.​
Chapter 1 - Purple Power​

It was night in Gion. Mizu, her brother Keiji, their cousin Toshiro and Keiji's close friend Shingo were in a small apartement which had a sushi market outside. Mizu was sitting inside her car, watching the town.


Keiji and Shingo were changing tyres to both their cars, since they burned the tyres while drifting.
Toshiro went outside.
"The sushi is ready"
"Ok"
Mizu was hungry and imediatly went inside.
"Toshiro, this is delicious."
"Mizu, do you want to go to Tokyo Bay for some practice tomorrow?"
"Tokyo Bay! Yay! That's a cool place to go!"
"Well, I would like to go."
"Cool! I'll finally go to Tokyo Bay track!"
"What's it got of special?"
"You'll see!"

*a little time after, in Keiji and Shingo's room*
"Hmmm, Keiji?"
"Hai?"
"Have you tested your new tyres?"
"Not already. I will test them tomorrow."

*in Mizu's room*
Mizu is writing on her diary.
"Today... I... recieved... an... invitation... to practice... at a track... in Tokyo... Bay... by my brother's close... friend."
"Goodbye... my... diary... I'm... going... to sleep." *lays down the pen and tries to sleep*

*next day, at Tokyo Bay*
"This Tokyo Bay track is cool."
"It looks like a kart track."


"Well, this track is suited for both karts and cars. Anyway this is just the short track. There is a bigger track in the outside of this."
"This track has got an interesting fact. It starts on a corner..."


"It looks fully made of corners!!!"


"Well, to prove you wrong, your warm-up session will start on a straight."
"Good luck, sister!"


"My S2000 will burn this track out!"


"I can hear my muffler now..."


"Good machine! Cornering on top!"


"Let's take the apex!"


"We got it!"


"Let's exit from it!"


"Here are the racing slots. There must be the starting corner!"


"Shingo, look! She started right now!"
"Hmmm..."
"The starting corner!"


"Such a long corner!"


"A straight..."


"Not very long though."


"I find that in this track the corners are longer than the straights. It's strange because it's a kart track and karts do spin if they run too long on corners."


"This track kind of makes me curious."


"But I just really don't know why..."


"Back to the start of the warm-up! The big straight!"


"This track may be simple. But like my brother I like its way."


"Now, for the last corner!"




"Oh no! I missed the apex!"


"I'm finishing!"


"Finish!!!"


*at home, 11:00 AM*`

Mizu and Shingo are in the living room. Mizu is reading a book and Shingo is playing Gran Turismo 5.
"Shingo?"
"Hai?"
"Where's Keiji?"
"At the track."
"Oh... my... god."

At that moment, in Grand Valley Speedway...

"Yeah! Ha, ha! Drifting!"


"I see big smoke trails behind me! Ha, ha!"


"Ha, ha! 180!"


"Oops! Well, it's just a little scratch..."


"Here we go again, BZ-R!"


"Oops! Ha, ha... No trouble! It's rally! Ha, ha..."


"Time to drift!"


*at home*

"Hey people! I'm back!"
"Hey, Kei'! How are the new tyres then?"
"I love to drift with them."
"Hopefully you don't burn them..."
"Don't worry, Mizu! I know how to drift better now."
"I would like to find someone else to our racing team..."
"Yeah... then we will be 4 racing at PR-Academy!
"I would search for someone skilled or either smart."
"Do smartness counts for racing?"
"If we aren't smart at racing, we fail! Like we failed at not being smart using our old tyres!
"I want to race today."
"I know a race today! I saw it at the track in a race list. You can put your name in the list until today at 3:00 PM."
"Keiji..."
"What's the matter? Didn't you say you wanted to race?"
"Yeah! Thank you very much! Can we go now?"
"Go yourself! Don't tell me you're scared?"
"Not... I just don't like being alone..."
"I will go with you, Mizu"
"Where are you going to?"
"To the track!"

*at the track*
"Oh my god! All the places are full! I will need to be last!"
"At least you are going to race..."
"Yeah... But in last place it's hard to place first..."
"Sometimes, it's possible. If we want, we can!"
"Yeah. Anyway, I'm looking for a challenge... So this is perfect, anyway!"

*at lunch time, at home*
"Yes! I'm going to race, I'm going to race, I'm going to race! Oh my god I can't wait!!"
"Did you saw the cars of the race?"
"Yeah. Most of them are japanese sports cars. There are two american cars and two german cars. Hope they don't make trouble!"
"If it was a race to cars with about 150HP I would put my name on the list. But since it was for cars with about 300HP... I said that to you, Mizu."
"Cars with about 300HP? Hasn't an S2000 got only 250HP?"
"Yeah, but mine is tuned. It has got exactly 291HP."
"Anyway my Trueno has got like 180HP. So it's more like 200HP."
"Your car is front-wheel-drive. Rear-wheel-drive cars are better..."
"I like them both. And I also like AWD cars. But my favourite combination is rear-wheel-drive and light-weight, like my Roadster."
"Talking about the team, Shingo, when will you search for people?"
"Maybe late at night."

*at the living room, 5:00 PM*

"My race will start in one hour! At 5:30PM we will go to the track."
"Ok"
"Which is that game you guys are playing?"
"It's Gran Turismo 5. It's the best simulator in the world. You can have your dream cars and race them in your dream tracks!"
"I would like to play it. Can I create a profile at the game?"
"The profile needs to be created at the PS3"
"I can't wait to my race. But I also can't wait to play that game..."

Shingo lost the race by a lot. His Lambo spun out in the last corner of High Speed Ring.
"Yeah! My McLaren won!"
"Hey! My car spun out!"
"Guys, it's now 5:15PM. We should get going. I want to get there at 5:30PM."
"Ok, Mizu!"

*at the track*
We were checking the grid.

Note: Now the color of the text matches the color of the car, except for Mizu.
GRID
Yellow Mazda RX-7 Type RS-R (FD)
Red Mazda RX-7 Type RS (FD)
Silver Chrysler 300C
Silver Mercedes-Benz CL55 AMG
Red Chevrolet Corvette Stingray (C2)
Black Mazda RX-7 Type RZ (FD)
Yellow Honda NSX Type-R (NA1)
Silver BMW 135i Coupe
Green Jaguar E-Type Coupe
Silver Subaru Impreza WRX
Silver Subaru Impreza WRX
Purple Honda S2000 (AP2)


"Of all these FD's, none is the very rare RS-R. I will win!"


"All right, the Type RS is the best FD of the three sample FD's! Yeah!"


"Let's show them the power of the American cars!"


"Ha ha! Diese japanischen Altautos haben keine Chance!" ["Ha ha! These japanese scrap cars don't stand a chance!"]


"These ricers will eat my dust!"


"Oh, three FD's in here? Anyway, none is the Type RZ. Hope I can get that RS-R!!"


"This is the pure legend of the Japanese super cars! It will win!"


"Ich liebe dieses Auto! Es wird auf diese ricers gewinnen!" ["I love this car! It will win to these ricers!"]


"These modern crap cars don't even know what this classic car can do."


"Who cares? WRX rocks."


"Another WRX... Well, god. Will I ever enter a race which hasn't got the same car than me?"


"This is going to be a tight race. I bet!"


Commentator: On your marks... Get set... GO!

As the commentator shout, all the racers had pushed hard for their cars.


Mizu passed the WRX in the first straight.

"Yeah! Yeah!"
WRX driver: "Oh no!"

Then she passed the E-Type and focused on the other WRX.

E-Type driver: "NOOO! I can't believe that modern crap car had pass me!"
"Ha ha! WRX, you're next!"
WRX driver: You may have passed the other WRX, but you will not pass me."

But she overtaked the WRX, and gone for the German luxury cars.

WRX driver: "Damn it!"
"Ha ha! Gotcha!"
BMW and Mercedes drivers: "Sie ist nicht an mir vorbei, ricer!" ["You will not pass me, you ricer!"]

But they were wrong.

BMW driver: "Oh nein!" ["Oh no!"]
The Mercedes driver made a horse face and didn't even say anything.

"Now, for the next car..."

"An NSX..."
NSX driver: "Hey, how could that little slow car come to me?"

But she done it!

"I got you! Goodbye!"
NSX driver: "Oh my god. I think my master won't be happy."

Then she attacked the Corvette.

Corvette driver: "That car is lookin' like a toothbrush to me."
"And your car is looking like a snail to me!"

And it was a snail.

"Hey, waddup' homie? Havin' trouble with ya' V8?"
Corvette driver: "🤬 you!"

Then it was time for the RZ.

RZ driver: "Dude, you ain't passing me! I know how to save my position!"

He was really tight!

RZ driver: "Get offa' me!"
"Sorry bud! I'm presistent!"

Mizu took her chance: the corner.

"I'm almost there, almost there!"
RZ driver: "Dude, this' what I call an opponent!"

And she done it!

"Yeah!"
RZ driver: "Oh gosh! This can't be real!"

Time for the lil' limousine.

"For godness sake! That car, if we even call it a car, looks like a limousine!"
300C driver: "Isn't that car powered by 10HP? Ha ha ha!"

And it was a curious car.

"That thing may not look fast, but it is fast indeed!"
300C driver: "That car is chasing me for a while!"

Mizu was very focused on that "limousine".

"I will not give up!"
300C driver: "Damn him!"

"I will never give up."

300C driver: "That car is fast!"
RZ driver: "Oh my god! That S2000 driver is overtaking everyone!"

And she made it!

300C driver: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
"Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai!"

Then she focused on the FD's. But they were too fast.

"But I still won't give up... I never give up..."

The RS driver didn't even noted Mizu was chasing him.

"Never give up! Never, never, but NEVER give up!"

Mizu was pushing her car to the max.

"Go, S2000! I want to win!"

Mizu came closer to the RS driver...

"Go, don't let me lose!"

She tried her best and she tried to do even better!

"I will never catch up to that RS-R. At least I would want second place!"

Finally, the RS driver noted her.

RS driver: "Hmmm??"

Mizu was pushing it and the RS driver done the same to protect his position!

"I will get you!"
RS driver: "Wasn't that car the last on the grid?"



"No, please! Don't oversteer!!"

Mizu controled the car's oversteer and protected third place.

And she came in third place.

"It's a podium finish. I will keep that on mind!"

Yes. She crossed the line in third.

"Hai! A podium finish!"

*at the pits*

"Congratulations Mizu! You've got a podium finish!"
"Yeah. Against heavily tuned FD's it's not so bad!"
"The FD's were heavily tuned?"
"I'm now checking their profiles and it says they have got 320 and 310 horsepower, respectively. A stock FD has got like 260, right?"
"Yeah. My stock car had 246HP. Now it has got 291HP."
"I checked the other cars profiles and they have like 290-300, so they're inside your line."
"I... can't... believe on this."
They all look on Keiji's laptop.
"What's that Keiji?"
"The list of parts of the RS-R. It has got a interesting sentence here!"
They read the sentence which Keiji highlighted.

In 2005 it was caught from street racing and sent to a scrapyard. It got bought by someone in 2007 who tuned it with crazy parts from the scrapyard.

"That's it!"
"A scrapyard powered car?! That's crazy!"
"I realized that the car was making cheating! They could have cars to 340HP. They say that car has got 320 HP. But it runs like it had actually 400HP."
"How about the red FD?"
"I would overtaken it, but my car done oversteer."
"Maybe you'll win."
"Next time."
"Maybe, guys. Maybe!"

*next day in the early morning*

Mizu, Keiji and Shingo were in the mountains.
Mizu and Keiji were sightseeing and Shingo was trying out a new track, built to replace the old track (now dirt.)

"The mountain is beautiful."
Keiji was throwing stones to the lake.
"Yeah... I love to be in the mountains, travelling."

Shingo's car stopped by them.



"Shingo? What's the matter?"
"I remembered now... That right here..."
"Is it about the team?"
"Exactly!"
Mizu and Keiji listen to Shingo.
"There is a professional rally driver and he runs around the mountains, in the dirt roads. We might search it!"
"Shingo, my car hasn't got dirt tyres!"
"Neither mine. But we can go by foot."

They run through the mountains. They heard a car. Sounded like a rally car.
"I think I can hear him!"
They saw the car driving around.


The car stopped by them.

The guy got out.
They all said:

"Hello?"

End of Chapter 1.

Don't miss Chapter 2 - Mt. Takei! Coming next week!
 
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Glad to see another member taking up the fine art of writing fan fiction. đź‘Ť
 
Character Biographies!

Mizu

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Age: 21
Gender: Female
Drives a car? Yes
Drives a kart? No
Interesting fact: Crashed a Subaru Impreza GC directly to a wall.
Likes: racing, cars, books.
Dislikes: violence, motocycle sound, Justin Bieber music

Keiji

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Age: 16
Gender: Male
Drives a car? Yes
Drives a kart? Yes
Interesting fact: His hair was black when he was a baby, but they turned brown later.
Likes: cars and karts, drift, rock music
Dislikes: dishonest people, having too much homework, Justin Bieber music

Shingo

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Age: 16
Gender: Male
Drives a car? Yes
Drives a kart? Knows how to, but doesn't
Interesting fact: Left his dad's old 323F in a lake by accident while learning to drive.
Likes: cars and karts, drift, rock music
Dislikes: dishonest people, crashing, Justin Bieber music

Toshiro

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Age: 40
Gender: Male
Drives a car? No
Drives a kart? No
Interesting fact: Won the sushi cook championship three times consecutively: 1991, 1992, 1993. And won the 2000 one.
Likes: cooking, sushi, women
Dislikes: gays, fast food, loud noise

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To be revealed at Chapter 2...

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To be revealed at Chapter 2...

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To be revealed at Chapter 2...

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To be revealed at Chapter 2...

Now, you know how many new characters will appear at Chapter 2.
Do you want a hint? One of them is a female.
 
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Note that all of them dislike violence...
 
Added gender and looking to the Character Biographies.

Chapter 2 was going to be released today, but...
it was delayed.
Probably releasing tomorrow or Thursday.
 
Added gender and looking to the Character Biographies.

Chapter 2 was going to be released today, but...
it was delayed.
Probably releasing tomorrow or Thursday.

Don't worry mate, take your time. You don't have to be in a rush.

And I read chapter 1 too, all I can say is that you're off to a good start. đź‘Ť
 
Follow the colors!​
Olive: Pablo HĂ©rnandez
Red: Takeshi Yataro
Teal: Tobi Yamada
Magenta: Hikari Miyama

Chapter 2 - Mt. Takei



"Hey guys! Are you lost?"
"No, we were just looking for you"
"Looking for me? Why?"
"For nothing, for nothing. Anyways. Name and age, please?"
"I'm Pablo HĂ©rnandez, I'm spanish. I am 25."
"You own a Evo, right?"
"Yes, I own a Mitsubishi Lancer Evolution VII GT-A from year 2002."
"What is your favoruite car?"
"Well, I like Evos, Imprezas and Skylines. These are my favourite cars, but I like more cars. What's your cars?"
"I own an S2000, my name is Mizu and I'm 21."
"I own an AE111, my name is Keiji and I'm 16."
"I own a Roadster, my name is Shingo and I'm 16 too."
"You guys also have cool cars. Do you want a ride?"
"Yeah. Leave us on the road."
"You can get in!" *enters car*
They all enter the car and close doors.


"Hey! Slow down!"


"Don't worry we're almost there"


"Whoah!"
"AHHHHHHHHHH!"
"Calm down!"


"Village, hey..."
"You don't know how to drive slow?"
"I know, but I don't like to..."


"It smells tarmac!"
"Finally."
"Can you leave us at the bottom of the mountain, please?"
"Alright..."


"I will leave you here. Nice to meet you guys. Hasta la vista!"
"Oh, almost forgot, would you like to join our..."



"Huh..."


"He's gone."
They all facepalmed.
"Ok, now we need to climb the hill..."


"Space, please?"

They were at the hill top when they heard a car.
That moment, on the bottom...


The car was entering the pits of the new track.


The car was now running a little slower...


Then it stopped, for the refueling process to start.


The car was now quitting the pits.


The car was now stopped by Mizu, Keiji and Shingo.
"Hey Mizu!"
"Hey, Takeshi. That's your Evo? It looks cool!"
"Aw, thank you!"

Warning: This is just an experience of Chapter 2. The full chapter will be out soon!
 
That Evo V looks awesome. As for the VII GT-A, it looks like crap, but I guess it's a standard.
 
The Evo GTA is a standard. However... I'm sorry about this but...

This thread will need to be closed because I'm tired of it. I took 198 pictures for chapter 2 and I will not be able to do it. And Imageshack traded all the pictures' order, I'm not that smart to know a track almost the same everywhere.
The NEW FAN FICTION - UK Pro Logic Here!
 
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