The First Draft Of My:

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"What a Rookie Would See" section

This Is My First Draft Of It, Found In The Beginner Course. If Ya'll Like It, and athorize me to make more, you will see stuff like this in every track, except a little better Format And stuff like that.

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The Wall....Runner!
 
A couple of grammar/spelling errors that I don't have time to fix right now, but otherwise it looks good. Write-ups like that are what make for good reading and bring a little more out of the game.
 
I fixed all the mistakes I could see for you. ;)

Good work though. Keep it going and it'll be a nice addition.
 
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