The Real Game-Chapter 0: Prologue.

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This is my first shot of writing a fanfic, I hope it goes well!
(Warning: May have harsh language, but I have censored it a bit)
Prologue: (Source)
2004
Kevin: Okay, I want you to race this Cien for 24 hours, against these LMPs, and I want you to WIN.
Nick: Okay.
(Nick goes into the Cien)
Nick: What the 🤬? Putting me in a Cien against Le Mans winners in a freaking CADDILAC.
At the end:
1st Kevin's Cien
2nd Toyota Minolta
3rd Jaguar XJR-9
4th Pescarolo Courage C60
5th Audi R8 Race Car
6th Peugeot 905 Race Car
7th Toyota GT-ONE Race Car
8th Gillet Vertigo Race Car
Nick: I am SO exhausted, but I won. Hey Kevin, what do I win?
Kevin: Absolutly nothing, I am firing you right NOW.
Nick: But, all this time...
Kevin: Go home Nick, nobody cares about you any more!
Nick: I feel sorry for everyone who treats us like slaves, then gives us nothing when we win with the Caddilac just so they can enjoy their free F1 Car. I feel sorry for their lives.
End of Chapter.
(I never did complete GT4. Oh and, a GT5 fanfic subforum would be nice :sly:)
 
To me, I find the Prologue to be a bit odd as a beginning story. But it does leave the reader to wonder a bit about it.
 
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You think so? Then the Bob must have been very experienced.
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"I feel sorry for everyone who treats us like slaves"
"I am firing you right NOW"

Those two lanes pretty much say that Nick is a Bob to me. I might be wrong though.
 
NascarManiaco99
"I feel sorry for everyone who treats us like slaves"
"I am firing you right NOW"

Those two lanes pretty much say that Nick is a Bob to me. I might be wrong though.
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It has potential :p But I would find it frustrating if the story will revolve around a B-Spec driver.
 
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It has potential :p But I would find it frustrating if the story will revolve around a B-Spec driver.
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No, it's more story based and that was partly a take that to the people who did that in GT4. And Nick's not a Bob :lol:
 
tankuroded
I'm sorry but I find the prologue a bit boring. You may consider adding a picture. ;)
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I can do that, thanks to the Arcade Mode :lol:
Mind you, the story isn't mainly focused on racing
And one more thing worth.mentioning, the chapters are rather short.
 

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