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UP THE RANK
Prologue
Hi, my name is Rick, Rick Seams. Friends call me "Ricky". I have bright,white hair. I will be changing it, I don't like the looks I get. I am 26 years old. My dream car to own is 04' SS Commodore.
Right now I drive a '95 Integra Type R. It is a DC2 model. I'm starting to consider replacing the Integra because I want something with more power, and to experience a different drive train.
I have a girlfriend, named Miliser. She has bright, blond hair. She likes working with cars and adores them. I have a Dad, named Eric, and he has dark, brown hair. He has recently retired in V8 Supercars. I have a Mum named Catie. She has dark, brown hair with brighter brown highlights.
I have just finished my degree in physics and science at University.
I am a mechanic at Fielding Power shop, and have been for 8 years.
I live in New Zealand, in Fielding.
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Chapter One- A new beginning.
Rick, with his face beaming in the manner of someone who has just won a million dollars, comes running down the stairs as the small crowd below applauds.
"WOOOOOOO, yeah!" Mum shouts. Rick walks to where Mum and Dad are with so much ideas in his mind he fells like his Brains going to explode!
"Great job, Darling." Mum says happily.
"Congratulations, Son." Dad says impressed.
"Thanks guys. I also have an announcement, I'm going to start racing." Announced Rick, overflowing with confidence.
Mum raises a smile. "That might start sooner that you think"
"What does she mean by that?" Rick mumbles, looking a little puzzled.
"What did you say honey?" Asks Mum
"Nothing Mum, just talking to my self." Explains Rick
"What about your job?" Dad asks.
"It's a Weekend thing." Rick answers
"Ok, we have something for you." Mum says excitedly
"What do you mean by "We" Mum?" Asks Rick looking a little puzzled.
"You will see." Answers Mum
Out of no where, Miliser comes.
"Hey Ricky! Congratulations!" Miliser says, beaming with happiness.
"Hi Miliser, Thanks!"
"Your Mum and I got you something you like." Tells Dad.
"That's right!" Adds Mum.
"Cool, I can't wait!" Rick shouts Excitedly.
Mum and Miliser smile
"I'm sure you will like it. Right enough chatter, lets go home." Says Mum
"Great idea!" Adds Rick
In the car
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"So Mum what did you mean by "It will come sooner than you think"?" Rick says
"Like I said last time, "You will see" Tells Mum
Beacon Street (their home)
They walk, Rick thinks that they are going inside but the others are going to the next street so he follows, and when they stop, Rick sees a car cover.
"I hope you like it." Mum says beaming with a smile.
"I helped pick it out." Adds Miliser with a smile.
"You can pull the car cover off now." Says Mum.
And to Ricky's eyes was his dream car a 2004 Holden Commodore SS
"OH. MY. GOODNESS. My dream car! Thank you thank you thank you! Rick kisses and hugs Mum and Miliser. Its in my favourite colour, black! Thank you so much! Thank you!" Rick says in Extreme excitement.
"Looks like you like it." Says Mum
"Nah I don't like it, I LOVE it! It's Awesome!" Shouts Rick.
Goes to Mum and and gives them a even bigger hug.
"We got you your favourite rim type, OZ racing ones!" Adds Dad.
"Really!, awesome! Thank you so much! Where are they?" Asked Rick.
"There in the boot, we didn't get a chance to put them on yet" Explains Dad.
"Oh, ok." Says Rick
"Why don't we go inside?" Says Mum.
"Yeah, ok. It's getting cold out here." Adds Rick.
"Let's go." Says Mum.
Inside
"And, here is another present...CAKE!" Mum announces
"Yummy! Thanks guys, this has been the best day of my life!" Says Rick.
"I hope you have fun with your car, Ricky." .Tells Mum
"I will." Rick then gives Mum a kiss.
"I'm keen for some cake, is anyone else?" Askes Rick while he rubs his tummy.
"Oh, yes please!" Says Mum.
"Me to!" Adds Miliser.
"Here you go, and here you go." Says Rick.
Miliser and Mum say thank you.
"And a piece for my self." Says Rick.
"So what are you going to do now that you have no more university?" Askes Miliser
"Now I have another car, I will start racing." Rick announces
"Wow, I'm shocked, but not surprised. What type of racing?" Miliser askes.
"Just standard track day racing." Answers Rick.
"Oh yeah. I might head off now, it is starting to get late." Says Miliser.
"Yeah, do you want a ride?" Rick offers Miliser.
"That would be kind, thanks!" Says Miliser.
"No problem. Mum, do you want to come?" Rick asks Mum.
"Ok." Says Mum.
"Lets go...Oh shoot! My jersey!" Says Miliser.
"I will go get it, wait there." Says Miliser.
"Sure." Says Rick.
WAITING
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"Ok, I'm back!" Says Miliser.
"Ok, lets hit the road! Let's go!" Says Mum.
They walk out side
"Hey Ricky, you really need to change your hair colour, it doesn't suit you." Says Miliser.
"Agreed, that colour doesn't suit you." Says Mum.
"Yeah, I don't know what I was thinking with the colour. I was actually going to go to the barber tomorrow." Rick explains.
"Wheres Dad by the way?" Asked Rick.
"He's gone to bed." Answers Mum
They go in the car
"Wow, it's not often that you can drive your dream car, let alone own it." Says Rick
"I'm very nervous, I don't know what it will do to me, SO BUCKLE UP!" Announces Rick.
Rick then roars the engine to life.
"Here we go!" Said Rick.
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BIG THANKS TO HOMEFORSUMMER FOR LETTING ME USE SOME OF HIS WRITING!
Prologue
Hi, my name is Rick, Rick Seams. Friends call me "Ricky". I have bright,white hair. I will be changing it, I don't like the looks I get. I am 26 years old. My dream car to own is 04' SS Commodore.
Right now I drive a '95 Integra Type R. It is a DC2 model. I'm starting to consider replacing the Integra because I want something with more power, and to experience a different drive train.
I have a girlfriend, named Miliser. She has bright, blond hair. She likes working with cars and adores them. I have a Dad, named Eric, and he has dark, brown hair. He has recently retired in V8 Supercars. I have a Mum named Catie. She has dark, brown hair with brighter brown highlights.
I have just finished my degree in physics and science at University.
I am a mechanic at Fielding Power shop, and have been for 8 years.
I live in New Zealand, in Fielding.
---
Chapter One- A new beginning.
Rick, with his face beaming in the manner of someone who has just won a million dollars, comes running down the stairs as the small crowd below applauds.
"WOOOOOOO, yeah!" Mum shouts. Rick walks to where Mum and Dad are with so much ideas in his mind he fells like his Brains going to explode!
"Great job, Darling." Mum says happily.
"Congratulations, Son." Dad says impressed.
"Thanks guys. I also have an announcement, I'm going to start racing." Announced Rick, overflowing with confidence.
Mum raises a smile. "That might start sooner that you think"
"What does she mean by that?" Rick mumbles, looking a little puzzled.
"What did you say honey?" Asks Mum
"Nothing Mum, just talking to my self." Explains Rick
"What about your job?" Dad asks.
"It's a Weekend thing." Rick answers
"Ok, we have something for you." Mum says excitedly
"What do you mean by "We" Mum?" Asks Rick looking a little puzzled.
"You will see." Answers Mum
Out of no where, Miliser comes.
"Hey Ricky! Congratulations!" Miliser says, beaming with happiness.
"Hi Miliser, Thanks!"
"Your Mum and I got you something you like." Tells Dad.
"That's right!" Adds Mum.
"Cool, I can't wait!" Rick shouts Excitedly.
Mum and Miliser smile
"I'm sure you will like it. Right enough chatter, lets go home." Says Mum
"Great idea!" Adds Rick
In the car
--------------
"So Mum what did you mean by "It will come sooner than you think"?" Rick says
"Like I said last time, "You will see" Tells Mum
Beacon Street (their home)
They walk, Rick thinks that they are going inside but the others are going to the next street so he follows, and when they stop, Rick sees a car cover.
"I hope you like it." Mum says beaming with a smile.
"I helped pick it out." Adds Miliser with a smile.
"You can pull the car cover off now." Says Mum.
And to Ricky's eyes was his dream car a 2004 Holden Commodore SS
"OH. MY. GOODNESS. My dream car! Thank you thank you thank you! Rick kisses and hugs Mum and Miliser. Its in my favourite colour, black! Thank you so much! Thank you!" Rick says in Extreme excitement.
"Looks like you like it." Says Mum
"Nah I don't like it, I LOVE it! It's Awesome!" Shouts Rick.
Goes to Mum and and gives them a even bigger hug.
"We got you your favourite rim type, OZ racing ones!" Adds Dad.
"Really!, awesome! Thank you so much! Where are they?" Asked Rick.
"There in the boot, we didn't get a chance to put them on yet" Explains Dad.
"Oh, ok." Says Rick
"Why don't we go inside?" Says Mum.
"Yeah, ok. It's getting cold out here." Adds Rick.
"Let's go." Says Mum.
Inside
"And, here is another present...CAKE!" Mum announces
"Yummy! Thanks guys, this has been the best day of my life!" Says Rick.
"I hope you have fun with your car, Ricky." .Tells Mum
"I will." Rick then gives Mum a kiss.
"I'm keen for some cake, is anyone else?" Askes Rick while he rubs his tummy.
"Oh, yes please!" Says Mum.
"Me to!" Adds Miliser.
"Here you go, and here you go." Says Rick.
Miliser and Mum say thank you.
"And a piece for my self." Says Rick.
"So what are you going to do now that you have no more university?" Askes Miliser
"Now I have another car, I will start racing." Rick announces
"Wow, I'm shocked, but not surprised. What type of racing?" Miliser askes.
"Just standard track day racing." Answers Rick.
"Oh yeah. I might head off now, it is starting to get late." Says Miliser.
"Yeah, do you want a ride?" Rick offers Miliser.
"That would be kind, thanks!" Says Miliser.
"No problem. Mum, do you want to come?" Rick asks Mum.
"Ok." Says Mum.
"Lets go...Oh shoot! My jersey!" Says Miliser.
"I will go get it, wait there." Says Miliser.
"Sure." Says Rick.
WAITING
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"Ok, I'm back!" Says Miliser.
"Ok, lets hit the road! Let's go!" Says Mum.
They walk out side
"Hey Ricky, you really need to change your hair colour, it doesn't suit you." Says Miliser.
"Agreed, that colour doesn't suit you." Says Mum.
"Yeah, I don't know what I was thinking with the colour. I was actually going to go to the barber tomorrow." Rick explains.
"Wheres Dad by the way?" Asked Rick.
"He's gone to bed." Answers Mum
They go in the car
"Wow, it's not often that you can drive your dream car, let alone own it." Says Rick
"I'm very nervous, I don't know what it will do to me, SO BUCKLE UP!" Announces Rick.
Rick then roars the engine to life.
"Here we go!" Said Rick.
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BIG THANKS TO HOMEFORSUMMER FOR LETTING ME USE SOME OF HIS WRITING!
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