X²- Epilogue
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***
9AM
Nurburgring GP storage garages, Nurburg
Sabine Schmitz is in the pitlane, polishing her beloved M5
Ah, Good morning, Nurburg!
Oi!
Huh?
Mal, having broken the X1's clutch, had to find somewhere to hide it. He had made it to the pitlane, when it cut off.
He had begun to push it, when it suddenly began rolling faster than he could run.
And now it was running loose, directly into Sabine's M5.
*CRUNCH*
It left nothing more than a tiny 4mm dent, but Sabine was worked up now!
Heeeeeyyyy!!!!! What do you think you're -
She runs up, and delivers a massive uppercut to Mal's chin.
You Little ****! Are you daft? WHa-
Then she sees what crashed into her M5...
Ahhh....you always bring trouble, Mal...
She drags Mal's unconscious body into the garage, pushes the relatively light X1 in, and also backs her M5 in as well.
Sabine closes the door, grabs a chair, and ties Mal up on the chair.
I see...my mentor returns; for what reason?
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Every girl that's ever hit me has seriously injured me....so yeah
It can't be that bad, can it.....
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Getting punched by anyone on the volleyball team makes for some 1-week bruises
What did you do?
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Toying with Hitomi
Arhweiler Gate, 3AM
John, having waited for Mal for several hours, finally sees a sign of him; a white M5.
The M5 pulls up, and a beat-to-a-pulp Mal gets out.
🤬you, 🤬! he screams at Sabine.
Where've you been?
**** you too, little ****! Sabine screams out of her window.
God, she's in quite a mood. Now, where's our "car"
In her hands, now.
What? You've lost it?
No, it's in a storage garage in the Nurburgring. It's under Sabine's name, though.
Oh...well, I guess we'll get it in the morning.
How'd you get here?
Taxi.
Then, how are we going to get to the 'ring? I know I'm not walking...
John points across the street.
That.
A Mitsubishi Evo 8 sits across the street.
Takashi Okazakawa's Evo 8?
It's great, ain't it?
...you kept that piece of-
Don't knock it; it's our ride.
***
6AM, Nurburgring
Hitomi snuck out of their hotel room to get some practice on the ring herself- She had never driven on the ring before.
It's early...
What's this?
An Evo sits parked. Suddenly, a man gets out, and starts running towards the Nurburgring GP facilities.
Not minding him, Hitomi takes the first corner gingerly.
And then sees that the Evo has taken pursuit.
You're following a bit close...
Oh, silly girl...
Oh ****!
Hitomi was taken off guard from the blind corner.
Dirt!
Hmm...I wonder if I should tone it up a bit...
Damn! He's still behind me!
Where's the grip!?
The moment on the dirt had rendered Hitomi's tyre without grip for an instant.
But she had regained control. The Evo had closed the gap even more.
Is she daft? FRs are never suited for dirt...
It's getting a bit fast...but I need to shake him!
Nooo!!
Must not crash...Yuka will notice!
Hitomi missed the guardrail by a few mm.
She regained control again, but the Evo was now about to pass.
Running on the dirt without incident, the Evo gets in front.
Need to catch him!
Hitomi floors it in a frenzy...
...nearly catching the Evo...
Silly girl. Slow down.
Ha! I've-
...but Hitomi had gone in too fast.
AAAAHHHHH!!!! ****!
She dodges the rail again. Hitomi dislikes her loss, but has lost her composure to go on, in fear of damaging the BMW.
At least I didn't crash...
***
VTiRoj as Hitomi
Arhweiler Gate, 3AM
John, having waited for Mal for several hours, finally sees a sign of him; a white M5.
The M5 pulls up, and a beat-to-a-pulp Mal gets out.
🤬you, 🤬! he screams at Sabine.
Where've you been?
**** you too, little ****! Sabine screams out of her window.
God, she's in quite a mood. Now, where's our "car"
In her hands, now.
What? You've lost it?
No, it's in a storage garage in the Nurburgring. It's under Sabine's name, though.
Oh...well, I guess we'll get it in the morning.
How'd you get here?
Taxi.
Then, how are we going to get to the 'ring? I know I'm not walking...
John points across the street.
That.
A Mitsubishi Evo 8 sits across the street.
Takashi Okazakawa's Evo 8?
It's great, ain't it?
...you kept that piece of-
Don't knock it; it's our ride.
***
6AM, Nurburgring
Hitomi snuck out of their hotel room to get some practice on the ring herself- She had never driven on the ring before.
It's early...
What's this?
An Evo sits parked. Suddenly, a man gets out, and starts running towards the Nurburgring GP facilities.
Not minding him, Hitomi takes the first corner gingerly.
And then sees that the Evo has taken pursuit.
You're following a bit close...
Oh, silly girl...
Oh ****!
Hitomi was taken off guard from the blind corner.
Dirt!
Hmm...I wonder if I should tone it up a bit...
Damn! He's still behind me!
Where's the grip!?
The moment on the dirt had rendered Hitomi's tyre without grip for an instant.
But she had regained control. The Evo had closed the gap even more.
Is she daft? FRs are never suited for dirt...
It's getting a bit fast...but I need to shake him!
Nooo!!
Must not crash...Yuka will notice!
Hitomi missed the guardrail by a few mm.
She regained control again, but the Evo was now about to pass.
Running on the dirt without incident, the Evo gets in front.
Need to catch him!
Hitomi floors it in a frenzy...
...nearly catching the Evo...
Silly girl. Slow down.
Ha! I've-
...but Hitomi had gone in too fast.
AAAAHHHHH!!!! ****!
She dodges the rail again. Hitomi dislikes her loss, but has lost her composure to go on, in fear of damaging the BMW.
At least I didn't crash...
***
VTiRoj as Hitomi
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This is what happens when I drive the Nurburgring for the first time after a long break. 
At least you found a good way to explain my driving though machate. 
Regarding the wheels though, they're not wrong, it's just machate's fic is a few days into the future of mine. Minor spoilers.
At least you found a good way to explain my driving though machate. Regarding the wheels though, they're not wrong, it's just machate's fic is a few days into the future of mine. Minor spoilers.
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Japan, Haneda Airport Terminal 2
December 24, 11:59
John had sent the X2010 via shipping container, and Mal was sent to pick it up.
So...
Mal walks into a room, with a small computer screen labeled "Container Retrieval"
Right...simple I guess. G-T-P-W-N-X
Good. Now to find that building...
***
Route 7, Japan
December 24, 11:59
Jean Milton was patrolling the empty Route 7 in John's Veyron, under permission of Sylvia, of course.
He was called "Kamikazi" for his fearless and dangerous tactics of any pursued criminal.
Right now, he stops to investigate a vehicle.
Hmm...What is this thing?
Suddenly, it takes off.
Kamikazi follows in pursuit.
The two rocket off into the distance. Meanwhile, a Commodor SS that happened to be cruising around at the time, stopped to take one picture of the car being pursued:
The speeds quickly reach dangerous levels; Kamikazi is in his zone.
But that alone is not enough; the vehicle goes even faster.
A Turn...the tunnel is soon!
The two scream into the tunnel; both going ~230
I'm gaining...
HA! Kamikazi touches the vehicle for an instant, going 292mph.
Suddenly, it speeds up more, and Kamikazi loses distance.
But how?!
Surely, it has to slow down for the turn...
Kamikazi watches in amazement...
...as the car makes the turn...
...at more than 300 mph!
No! The first time Kamikazi had been evaded.
He's escaped...
Mal somehow drove the X2010 to the front of the Ensemble without disturbance. There was only one problem...
John! He calls him on his phone.
You have it?
Yes I 🤬 have it! Hurry up and let me in!
What is it? Are the police outside?
No...a fat man in red is staring me down in his SLS!
The "fat man" steps out, walks over to Mal, and hands him a key.
The man was very old, with a beard extending down to his belly.
For you.
What's with the laugh?
You'll see. The car's in the same warhouse you found that in. He gestures to the X2010.
Wha-
Oh, and say hello to John for me. I'll be on my way now; still need to cover most of Asia and Europe!
And who are you?
Santa Claus, of course!
Santa gets back into the his sleigh; the SLS, and peels out.
Mal can only watch in amazement as a fleet of white Mercedes' roll out, with Santa in the rear.
Ho! Ho! Ho! Merry Christmas! he hollers out of the window.
WIth the roar of exhaust still reverberating in the distance, Mal then looks at the key; it's the key to a Cirtoen 2CV!
Korza493 as Kamikazi
December 24, 11:59
John had sent the X2010 via shipping container, and Mal was sent to pick it up.
So...
Mal walks into a room, with a small computer screen labeled "Container Retrieval"
Code:
[CENTER]Haneda Airport Terminal 2 Container Retrival
-_-_-_-_-_-_-<Enter 6 character code[/CENTER]Right...simple I guess. G-T-P-W-N-X
Code:
[CENTER]Haneda Airport Terminal 2 Container Retrival
-G-T-P-W-N-X-<Enter 6 character code[/CENTER]
loading...
searching system...please wait
Successfully Located:ZONE_NORTH_BLDG_07***
Route 7, Japan
December 24, 11:59
Jean Milton was patrolling the empty Route 7 in John's Veyron, under permission of Sylvia, of course.
He was called "Kamikazi" for his fearless and dangerous tactics of any pursued criminal.
Right now, he stops to investigate a vehicle.
Hmm...What is this thing?
Suddenly, it takes off.
Kamikazi follows in pursuit.
The two rocket off into the distance. Meanwhile, a Commodor SS that happened to be cruising around at the time, stopped to take one picture of the car being pursued:
The speeds quickly reach dangerous levels; Kamikazi is in his zone.
But that alone is not enough; the vehicle goes even faster.
A Turn...the tunnel is soon!
The two scream into the tunnel; both going ~230
I'm gaining...
HA! Kamikazi touches the vehicle for an instant, going 292mph.
Suddenly, it speeds up more, and Kamikazi loses distance.
But how?!
Surely, it has to slow down for the turn...
Kamikazi watches in amazement...
...as the car makes the turn...
...at more than 300 mph!
No! The first time Kamikazi had been evaded.
He's escaped...
***
Ensemble, Route 5Mal somehow drove the X2010 to the front of the Ensemble without disturbance. There was only one problem...
John! He calls him on his phone.
You have it?
Yes I 🤬 have it! Hurry up and let me in!
What is it? Are the police outside?
No...a fat man in red is staring me down in his SLS!
The "fat man" steps out, walks over to Mal, and hands him a key.
The man was very old, with a beard extending down to his belly.
For you.
What's with the laugh?
You'll see. The car's in the same warhouse you found that in. He gestures to the X2010.
Wha-
Oh, and say hello to John for me. I'll be on my way now; still need to cover most of Asia and Europe!
And who are you?
Santa Claus, of course!
Santa gets back into the his sleigh; the SLS, and peels out.
Mal can only watch in amazement as a fleet of white Mercedes' roll out, with Santa in the rear.
Ho! Ho! Ho! Merry Christmas! he hollers out of the window.
WIth the roar of exhaust still reverberating in the distance, Mal then looks at the key; it's the key to a Cirtoen 2CV!
Korza493 as Kamikazi
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Dear Conrad,
Whoever thought that revealing Route X would be beneficial to anyone other than those speed junkies...go ahead. Be sure to remove the No Fly Zone restriction, in order for people to be able to locate Route X via satellite. Also, we are close to finishing Project X²; a few tweaks, and we will have a new design.
Mal.V
Post.Script:
Keep the 2J speed trap and picture record of 745.826 km/h up in the main tunnel area where the oval speed records are held. I will officially retire when someone other than Mal and myself beats it!
John.V
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I only just realized that your story just evolves with GT's new features quite often. Like X1, and X2. Route X and so on. I think whenever there's something with a capital X in it it will find its way here.
Thanks; and as for the capital X thing, I think PD just has a habit of naming anything that doesn't have a solid definition as "X"
Also, the evolution of the story does change with the features; before the X2011 DLC, I was thinking of saying that the ForzaMotorsportAssociation of Japan has a massive riot in tokyo, and the brothers flee to their countries of choice, Mal going to an american type place reminiscent to "Burnout Paradise". John, on the other hand, Follows through with the FMA, for the simple reason that Gran-Turismo had been evicted from Japan.
I obviously don't plan on this happening, though.
Finally, my inspiration:
Fallen by Evanescence(Album)
I obviously don't plan on this happening, though.
Finally, my inspiration:
Fallen by Evanescence(Album)
I'm only doing this because the end of X² is near; only about 2 chapters remain.
Then I shall revisit the 60s...
Wow. Normally, if someone's been bad, they get a crapload of coal: Mal just gets a 2CV.
The 2CV has significance, you know. Read back a bit...you'll see it
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