I suck at critiquing , so i will post Thio's again. Good Job!Originally posted by Thio
Critique:
Good video. I don't know how long you have drifted, but that was a pretty good lap. Overall, you had a good rhythm with your car. It's good to have that or else the car will look choppy and the drifts will looks really weird. lol, I didn't expect to hear a slow song for a drift lap probably because this is the first time it's happenedthumbs up for creativity 👍 On the second hairpin, eventhough your thumb slipped off, you could continue to drift it even in the middle.As long as you drift the car, then try to recover as fast as you can. Also, I think you can pull off some more angles on your drift, especially when CudaMan's S13 had extreme angles. To make the drifts look smoother, try to not jerk the analog stick too much because then the steering will look chopped and not realistic. It's hard, but it looks really good in replays. On that last hairpin, the really tight left-hander, try to grab more angle on the two turns before so that you don't have to pull the e-brake to get the angle. All these things take time and practice. You have the stuff, but make sure that it doesn't go to waste
If I were to grade this as if it were an entry in the GTPDC, here is the score:
Angle - 8 points
Style - 8.5 points
Control - 8.5 points
Smoke - 3.5 points
Good job on the video overall 👍 I can't wait to see more from you unkn0wn
-Thio