Hmm, I'm not going to lie to you. That shot is pretty bad. The framing/composition is fine, but the car needs some immense clean up. The car is riddled with jaggies (mostly on the left A-Pillar, the perimeter of the windshield, the wheel wells, top of the headlights, headrests on the seats, and on the recession of the foglights). Another troubled thing about it is that is has a certain white tint or haze to it, as if you actually reduced the contrast. You definately want to increase the contrast on this photo to get the rumble strips to pop off the photo and have the car really be the main point of attention. It wouldn't hurt to bump up the saturation alittle as well. Nice idea, but bad quality. Good luck on your next one.