Explination...take it or leave it.

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Alright, here's the deal, I'm probably going to make this post and just leave because I might as well.

The reason for this double life? All to immerse myself into another identity to work on a book that is based off of me. But I just couldn't get into it without creating a double life. It's hard to explain really, but it's like an actor needing to put himself into a roll in order to be a better actor. I needed to do it to write better. Was this right? Not at all, but if I were to say that it was an experiement then I would have failed in my missions.

So here's the facts.

My name really is Joe, Joey, Joseph. I do live in South East, Michigan. I do drive a Blazer Xtreme. I am 18. I have a summer internship at GM this coming summer and one two summers ago, but last summer I worked for the City of Auburn Hills because they gave me more money. When I worked at GM I did infact design brackets for things, and yes I made one for the Corvette.

I used to own a Neon, a Civic, and a Mustang. I got my truck when I was 16 but went through a slew of cars before then. None of them ever worked well.

But ya that's about it, sorry about lieing to you all. But this is the truth and I told you why I did it. It was wrong but I had no other way to figure out how to do what I needed to do.

And honestly it wasn't supposed to last this long, but I became addicted and my novel got better and better with the more things I thought up. I would say about 70% of the stuff I posted was true, about 25% being a streched truth, and 5% being made up some how.

Sorry for all of this.

One last things, I didn't apperciate your comment on my journal. You could have easily displayed your disgust in a better manner.
 
If you're writing a book about yourself, why make up a persona which isn't you in order to do it?

Just curious, is all.

Also, it's "explanation", but I'm sure F7 would catch that for you.

Fancy posting the first few chapters? I'll post the first few of mine right after, and we can compare notes.
 
So we are all characters in a novel, cracking. thanks for explaining anyways 👍 im sure it took some guts.
 
Well, whatever the reason, at least you finally owned up. :) 👍

And sorry for posting the link to your accident thread in your journal, I was kinda mad at the time. :indiff:
 
Famine
If you're writing a book about yourself, why make up a persona which isn't you in order to do it?

It's not about myself, it's about someone like me but not. I created a character...and yes some of your personalities are used in the book. It's a psycological way to create characters, it's not the best to do such a thing but it worked for me.
 
BionicXtreme
I used to own a Neon, a Civic, and a Mustang. I got my truck when I was 16 but went through a slew of cars before then. None of them ever worked well.

None ??? I understand for the Neon, its a piece of garbage, a Mustang ??? Oh please, its a Ford... But a Civic, come on I mean, if it didnt worked well, it was your fault lol, not Honda's or the car. Maybe the previous owner of it, but not the fault of Honda, NEVER... lol

Anyway its off-topic....

To answer about your book thing, man I think its crap... But whatever, I dont judge you. :)
 
As long as my sentences are all in indigo...
 
I almost felt bad for you for a while, but that just ruined it.

Do you think everybody here is a complete fool? Why would you own three cars before you were even old enough to drive? Own up or leave, bud.
 
Compulsive liars aren't the most believeable people so excuse me for not really accepting anything you have to say.

We all enjoy our online existance as a place to act slightly differently, that's natural. But personally i find there's a limit at taking the piss.
 
Famine
If you're writing a book about yourself

:lol: After I read that I thought of the Army commerical where they say If you were to right a book (or was it make a movie) about you're life how long(or was it good) would it be?

Anyway, I don't see how I'm suppose to believe you now, I mean ok so you're back on GTP but that's about it to me.

BionicXtreme
It's not about myself, it's about someone like me but not. I created a character...and yes some of your personalities are used in the book. It's a psycological way to create characters, it's not the best to do such a thing but it worked for me.

:lol: Do you see Dead people too? Whatever...
 
My dad bought the the Neon from his company for pretty much nothing. I sold that because I didn't want it, I bought a Civic off my buddy for next to nothing thinking I could do something with it, didn't work out, sold it. Bought a Mustang from Groveland Township's fire depart thinking I could build it up, but it failed so I scraped it.

You have to understand I come from a family where money isn't really an objective.
 
Max Powers
Do you think everybody here is a complete fool? Why would you own three cars before you were even old enough to drive? Own up or leave, bud.

Dude, my little 16 yo cousin owns a Civic... lol
 
So... you went through a slew of cars... before you were 16? Do you live in Michigan, or do you live in Montana or some other BFE place?

And with the novel... are you actually writing it, or is it some figment in your imagination to keep you entertained?
 
BionicXtreme
You have to understand I come from a family where money isn't really an objective.

:odd: So what? you haven't seen *McLaren* do anything like this. All he does is buy **** and post it. :dopey:
 
BionicXtreme
You have to understand I come from a family where money isn't really an objective.
What ?... And you claim you're writing a book ?...

And it's "Explanation" - Not "Explination"....
 
I'm really not sure what to say, whether this is all BS or real. At least you DID post again and explained yourself. I'll just have to wait and see how this turns out...
 
:lol:

This is the greatest reason I have ever heard for lieing. I might try it in future.

"Sorry I completely forgot you Birthday. I was writing a book and needed this experience for it"

Brilliant.
 
So what is this Novel about again? Since we inspired you so much, I guess you share some passages with us, right?
 
I'm a writer but it doesn't mean my spelling is stellar. It's never been. You can still write a story and not be the most intellegent person in the world. There is a novel, its in notebooks, pads, napkins, its everywhere. I'm not organized at all. But I am trying to type it out. I've started writing, stopped restarted, and then started again.
 
ExigeExcel
:lol:

This is the greatest reason I have ever heard for lieing. I might try it in future.

"Sorry I completely forgot you Birthday. I was writing a book and needed this experience for it"

Brilliant.

👍👍👍 :lol:
 
Am I a character in it? :)

btw. this guy kind of reminds me of Joey. *language warning*http://factualmaterial.com/douchebag.htm

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The novel is about this guy (me-ish) who starts off life in this upper class family and goes through life trying to find his place. It seems like everything is awesome for him on the outside but on the inside he's confused and doesn't know what to do. So he goes into seclusion and it's a journey into his mind and how he ends up going nuts in the end. This is where I'm at...but don't know where to go for there. I think I want him to kill someone....it's supposed to be a series of books. Think K-pax meets Beautiful Mind.
 
BionicXtreme
I'm a writer but it doesn't mean my spelling is stellar. It's never been. You can still write a story and not be the most intellegent person in the world. There is a novel, its in notebooks, pads, napkins, its everywhere. I'm not organized at all. But I am trying to type it out. I've started writing, stopped restarted, and then started again.

So I guess you already have a few pages you could share with us? :dopey:
 
Carl.
So I guess you already have a few pages you could share with us? :dopey:

As I said, you show me yours, I'll show you mine.


No, wait...
 
I'll tell you what, I'll share the intro with you later tonight once my mom gets home with my laptop since that's where it's located at. But it will be posted with in an hour or so. I must say it's not very good, but never the less I'll so you the intro part to it.
 
It's good to see you back and making a try at telling the truth.

You realized you played with people, regardless of whether it was for a novel or whatever, you played with emotions and that wasn't right.
 
Screw it I'll just type up a part that in my notebook and post it.
 
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