first time photo....critique please...

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its my first try at it...i am into photography though so i know all the technical stuff like arperture and shutter speed...but just let me know how i could improve...thanks.
 
Let me guess. You encountered a problem with GTPlanet while making this thread, and kept clicking submit?
 
Welcome Dead_Poetic,

at first I´d say post your pics as thumbnails on imageshack.us, at least if there´d be more than one pic. Or resize the pic a bit, that also hides some glitches of the GT4-graphics like polygons or jaggies.

The following is my personal feeling. It might be that I don´t get the message you wanted to show with the pic, so please don´t get me wrong with the critics. :)

I see that your pic is not too dark from a technical point of view, but too dark from an aesthetical (and personal of course) point bof view. Dark cars in a dark environment are difficult to shoot. Make sure you got enough (or the most of the available) contrast range on the car.

Then I think you could place the car not too much out of center. In that particular pic it´s hard to know what you wanted to take a photo of: the car or the background scenery?

I think you oversharpened the pic. There is a white line around the right silhouette (sp.?) of the car body and on other places. That might be the result of too much sharpening.


That are the things I see just now. Go ahead and post more. 👍

Prost! :cheers:


Edit:

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thanks for all the critiques....ill try to take your advice bjc....by the way, what does prost mean?
 
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next try...i think that i may have sharpened it too much? but overall i like this one much better...
 
well i dont know why you cant click on it and see it bigger...im new to imageshack...sorry
 
No idea, but from what I've seen it looks a tad too dark. Good shot though.

By the way, use the edit button to avoid double-/triple-posts. Mods hate that.
 
Dead_Poetic
well i dont know why you cant click on it and see it bigger...im new to imageshack...sorry

Read the sticky at the top of the page, "Uploading Your Pictures & Videos," to get help on what to do to properly use Imageshack.

BTW, those stickies are there for a reason. Read them. All of them. In all the forums you want to post in. Please.
 
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