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really the only things that i dont like are the wheels...and the fact that the motion blur is too strong... oh and that theres not driver..haha.
 
Ok it didn`t turn out that bad. But i think if your try duplicate the motion blured layer like 4x you can get rid of those edges around the car. And don`t put the motion blur that high please. but evryting looks good.
 
ha..yea idk what i was thinking when i set it that high...it makes the car look like its going 700 mph or something...anyway thanks for the comment...
 
Make sure you cut the windows and blur them, the blur angle seems spot on, like LGForce said, make more than one layer, make 4 each with decreasing motion blur and the last one should be gaussian blurred. Nice job for your first one 👍
 
Looks good 👍


Does anyone know if this is also possible with Gimp? I can also select certain parts and blur them but is it possible with Gimp?



Pink,
 
I think this is a very well turned out first try. 👍 👍

The strenght of the motion blur is personal taste I´d say. With real photography you could reproduce that strong effect even with a slow driving car. Just open the shutter long enough. So in my opinion there´s nothing to say against the strong motion blur.

But there´s a slight unblurred halo around the car. LGforce and Dead_Poetic gave some good advice. I do it the lazy way:
1. cut out the car accurately.
2. copy only the car into a second layer.
3. motion blur the background layer.
4. on the background layer, push the cars halo under the car layer. (sweep it under the carpet) (dodge tool?, I don´t know the english term)

As gt_masta pointed out already, if the background is visible through the windows you have to do that motion blur with these parts as well, but not with the whole window. Just the visible background parts.

More!

Prost! :cheers:
 
Looks cool. I think U are on the good way to make great pics:)
 
thanks for the comments everyone...here are a couple more tries....

Zoom blurs:




I redid that mercury one..and also tried some others....




one that my girlfriend did but i edited...


and last...one that is just a regular pic not from gt4...im the most proud of this one....
original:

final:

sorry that there are so many i didnt realize how busy id been, im just new to it and i find it very fun to do...once again thanks for any comments and please critique some more...

oh one more...
 
Not bad...not bad at all:) My favourite shot of this update is the Mazda 6, great work on that!! Continue to make more and I think your pics will become even better!!
 
thanks everyone for th comments..i think that i will make a gallery soon.. so be on the lookout...thanks again...

heres a new one i edited, i was practicing with grain effects..maybe with enough practice they will look like ntx's...but ill keep dreaming...let me know what you think...


some more



 
yea i wasnt necessarily going just for his look, i was really just expirimenting with the grain effect, but his influence is def. there...thanks for the comment.
 
Number 2 in your latest update is my favourite, brilliant angle 👍

And I like the runaway car aswell :)
 

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