They are both good pictures. But there really was no relevant need to create a thread just to ask for opinions of an original photo taken from Gran Turismo.
Great attempt on redoing the photo in gt5 it almost looks the same except for gt5 being much brighter.
For your picture its good but you could probably get better pictures if you spent a long time on taking pictures. Why don't you just put up the pictures that you've taken that you like the most and let us decide which is your best picture?