Ready To Race? - [31-7-11] Chapter 9 (56K/AppWarning)

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This is my Race Report/ fanfic about a young adult who moves to Tokyo, Japan from Honshu, Japan. He finds out that he will be sharing his apartment in Tokyo with another teenager! Many new people will be introduced throughout the story and don't be suprised if I mention a few characters from other race reports!

Here is where we will keep the link to each chapter and Biography of each character as they are released!!

Character Biographies!

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Name: Satoru Toyama
Age: 21

Info: The Main Character of my story from Honshu, Japan. He Moves to Tokyo to find fun and excitement, His main car is a 1997 Nissan Skyline GT-R V-Spec (R33). He comes from a slightly rich family where he got money to tune his car, He is very outgoing and enjoys meeting new people, He is both a illegal street racer and a Track racer! He is going to Tokyo for real competition. He can be cocky sometimes!


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Name: Daiki Kimura
Age:23

Info: The 2nd Main Character of my story! He is born and raised in Tokyo, Japan he comes from a middle class family and bought a used S2000 and raced it illegaly. He earned enough money to completely transform the car! He has become a big fan of Honda's, He Is Arrogant and unkind to some people but nice and kind to others! He also races on tracks but prefers illegal street racing!

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Name: Takeshi Sato
Age: 24

Info: Born and living in Honshu Japan, Takeshi never really got on well with other racers both on track or illegal! His Parents divorced when he was 11 and since then he has been living with his father learning about cars! He drives Nissan Fairlady Z Version S (Z33) '07 is a BIG fan of Nissans! He is a sore loser and will do anything to win! (Bumping, Ramming and other things!) He doesn't like Satoru for one reason..... His car is faster!

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Name: Keith Lynch
Age: 20

Info: Keith was born in Clare, Ireland. He wanted to move to Japan ever since he was little! He started learning the language when he was twelve, he took a two year mechanics course in Ireland then set off for Japan! When he got there he was eighteen years old! Luckily for him a new garage was starting up in Tokyo called RVR. He got a job there fixing up cars and since then he has been able to Afford a Spoon CR-Z and modify it! Most of his Japanese friends laugh at the car, but he demands respect! He prefers circuit racing to street racing but is good at both! He is a kind person who can get hot headed though!

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Name: Rei Kimura
Age: 23

Info: Rei is a 23 year old girl born in Fukuoka, Japan! She moved to Tokyo because she wanted to make new friends and enjoy the nightclubs in downtown. She is a big fan of Rotary engines and Mazda, she also drives a Mazda RX-8! She is a extremely good street racer who is undefeated in Fukuoka. She hates track racing because she thinks its "Boring" and "Predictable". Her 1st car was an RX-7 which she wrecked in a street race! Soon after that she got the RX-8. Her Parents still live in Fukuoka and disapprove of her racing! She is slightly insane and talks to herself alot.. When she races she dosent talk much instead she goes to a "racing mode".

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I wonder who those other characters will be...
 
I'm gonna root for Daiki in this story. I can relate to him. :D

Very nice with the driver photos by the way, I can see PD had us story-writers in mind when they made the poses. :lol:
 
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Black Text - Satoru
Orange Text - Daiki
Pink Text - Receptionist
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"Here we are Tokyo City, After 5 hours of driving i'm finally here!"
"The buildings here are pretty big compared to Honshu"
"Yes!!! a straight time to see what this thing can do"
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"The scenery around here is beautiful"
"WOW! Look at those trees"
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"Kinda reminds me of Christmas... haha"
"Weird this road seems like a Race track"
"I bet alot of illegal street racing goes on around here"
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"I must save this area on my sat-nav so I can remember where to go for some races!"
"WAIT!!!! Here's my exit!!"
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"Phew!! Almost missed it when saving the location on my sat-nav!"
"Ok, I need to get the keys for my apartment"
(Goes into receptions office)"Can I have my apartment keys please?"
"Name?"
"Uhmm.. Satoru Toyama"
"Age?"
"I'm 21 years old"
"Ok, Your in room 241 Sharing with Daiki Kimura"
"Ok thanks, Better Get my car over there!"
"Here it is, Looks Peaceful"
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"Ok, here we are I better update my Facebook status to tell friends and family that I got here alright!"
"Ok i'll just lie down on the bed and update my....... Zzzzzzzzzzzzz"
"Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"

Meanwhile on Route 7....

"Wow the rain came fast"
"Wow! The rain is really heavy tonight!
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"Nearly Back at the apartment!"
"Oh yea I nearly forgot, That roommate probably came while I was at work"
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"I wonder what my new roomie is up to"

"Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"
"Probably nothing much"
"Ok, I am nearly home"
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"Turn off here, and pull in here"
"Voila, Here I am!"
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(Turns Keys)
"Oh, Hello!"

"Wha..... Wh... Oh Hi!"
"Sorry about that!!"

Continues in Chapter One!
 
Looks like we've got another member of the Gion Clan. :P Liking the layout, very easy to read. Looking forward to more. :D
 
Looks like we've got another member of the Gion Clan. :P Liking the layout, very easy to read. Looking forward to more. :D

Gion is the perfect location but theres another character that wont be living there but still in japan! I've got the next chapter planned already....
and the nerve of Daiki waking up Satoru :embarrassed:
 
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Black Text - Satoru
Orange Text - Daiki
Red Text - Takeshi
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Continued from Prologue......
"I'm Satoru, your new roommate"
"I'm Daiki, I'm 23!"
"I'm 21, You own a car?"
"Yea a Tuned S2000, how about you?"
"A Tuned R33, cool I like S2000's!"
"I'll show you it tomorrow, its 1.00am!!"
"Ok, im tired too... Im going to bed, see you tomorrow!"
"Night"

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"Go Fairlady GO!!"
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"Im not going to let that Skyline's lap beat me again!!"
"I can't believe he got that lap in a R33!!, A YEAR AGO!"
"C'mon Fairlady you've got more power than that R33 had"
"I know he has Four Wheel Drive but GOO!!!!
"Here Comes a Corner"
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"See Fairlady your better at taking corners you just are!!"
"This car is faster than that STUPID Skyline!"
"GO GO GOOO!!!!!!!!!"
"Here comes that S bend"
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"See that S bend was no problem!"
"Oh wow Mt. Fuji is looking nice today!, Focus Takeshi FOCUS!!"
"Coming up to the final Straight"
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"****! ****! ****!!!!!!!! **** you Satoru I can't believe your Skyline time beat me AGAIN!!!.... By 1.825 seconds!!!"
"Ughhhhhh..... Thats enough racing for today,, I will find you wherever you went Satoru!!
"Ok, im going home to find out where he went!!!"
(20 minutes later!.....)
"Here we are, home sweet home"
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"I Have to ask all my friends on Facebook do they know where he went, because I want to talk to him about that Skyline NOW!!"


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"What time is it Daiki?"
"It's 1.30PM"
"I really slept in, wow the place looks nice I wasn't able get a proper look at it last night because I was tired and it was dark"
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"C'mon were going to a friends house!!!!, Quick Get Dressed!!"
"Uhhhmm... ok, were does he live?"
"If your driving about 10 minutes away so not far from here."
"Ok, lets go!"


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That's original, using pics from PS Home. Is it just me or does a guy named Takeshi with a Z33 sound very familiar...:odd:
 
That's original, using pics from PS Home. Is it just me or does a guy named Takeshi with a Z33 sound very familiar...:odd:


Ermm.... not that I know of lol!
And thanks for the liking the PS Home bit... in time i might be using other media to get pics for my race report!

EDIT: I remember its from Fast & Furious Tokyo Drift that evil guy named Takeshi and his Z33!
 
I liked the PS Home pictures too. Really gives a different feel to the non-racing segments. Takeshi's Z33 looks a bit evil. :lol:
 
I liked the PS Home pictures too. Really gives a different feel to the non-racing segments. Takeshi's Z33 looks a bit evil. :lol:

The Z33 is supposed to be the meanest of the group and he will have a adventure
also there is another character yet to be announced :D
 
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Black Text - Satoru
Orange Text - Daiki
Blue Text - Kevin
Red Text - Takeshi
Green Text - Takeshi's Friend
Pink Text - RVR Owner (Dylan)

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"Ok Daiki, Here is my R33 Skyline. Its a '97 Model"
"It has 380BHP and it weighs 1371KG, of course its 4WD!"
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"What do you think?"
"It's nice..... for a Nissan"
"What do you mean?"
"Im just not a fan of Nissans, i'm more of a Honda person"
"Ok I see"
"Anyway here is my S2000, all riced out!"
"What are the Specs"
"Glad you asked, it has 315BHP and weighs 1160Kg and of course its Rear Wheel Drive!"
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"What do you think?"
"Very nice I must say"
"Thank you, So you ready to go?"
"Yea, lets go!"
"Here we go!"
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"Wait for me!!"
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"So where does your friend live?"
"He lives in Downtown Tokyo in a Hotel called Kosen"
"I see....."
"Were not far away from there now"
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"I'm Faster than you"
"You are not!"
"Sure I am"
"Not anymore your not!"
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"What the hell...."
"Haha keep up!"
"Dont worry i'll keep up!"
"See"

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"OK.. ok your fast too"
"Damn right!, ok turn in were here!"
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"Classy...."
"C'mon lets go get him!"
"Sure!"

(5 minutes later.....)
"Here we are room 67"
"Ok, is he there?"
"Yea, ill knock!"
"Hey Daiki, whos this guy??
"Hey Keith, He's Satoru my new roommate"
"Is he a racer?"
"Im right here you know!"
"Sorry, are you a Racer?"
"Yes I am"
"What you drive?"
"I got a R33 Skyline"
"Why does everybody have a better car than me??"
"What you got?"
"215Bhp Spoon CR-Z, weighs 1120Kg"
"HAHAAHA.... sorry"
"Stop laughing its a good and trusted car"
"Sure it is...."
"You wanna race me?"
"What in my Skyline?"
"No way that thing is too powerful"
"Then What?"
"I'll call my boss at RVR see if he has got anything"
"Whats RVR?"
"Its a Tuning Garage... now Shhh!"
"Hmmmmphh!"
"Hey Dylan whats up?"
"Nothing much, you?"
"Same, i'm looking for a favor"
"What is it?"
"Would you have a Powerful Hybrid on you?"
"I have a 180Bhp Insight it weighs 1017Kg, will that do?"
"Perfect, can you drop it off at the local Race track?"
"Sure expect it too be there in 10 minutes!"
"Thanks Dylan, See you!"
"See you Keith"
"HYBRID RACE!!!!!! Satoru Vs. Keith"
"So i'm in the Insight"
"Yea Satoru, see you at the track"
"Im just going to watch in the Stand"
"Ok, Daiki"
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"You ready Keith?"
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"Ready Satoru!"
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3, 2, 1.... GO!!!!!
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"Damn that Insight is FAST!"
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"Go CR-Z Go!"
"I like this Car"
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"Im catching up!"
"He's not catching up!"
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"CR-Z you can do it!"
"OH Shhhhiii............"
"Agghhhhhhhhhhhhh"
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"Oops"
"YES, he spun it"
"Hahaha I passed!"

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"Damnit Insight!"
"YEA CR-Z"
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"He will never catch up!"
"I won't be able to catch him after that!"
"Wait there he is!"
"Go Insight!"
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"He's catching up! HOW???"
"This Doesn't make any sense!"

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"Quick Insight go catch up!"
"GO faster CR-Z!"
"No he really caught up now!"

"Look behind you"
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"WOW I need an Insight!"
"He's Right Behind ME!!!!
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"Theres the finish line, go Insight"
"Im going to do it, Go CR-Z!"
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"YES!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Dammit"
"Good race Keith"
"You to Satoru!"
"Heres the Keys for the insight"
"Heres your Skyline's Keys!"
"Thanks, I'm going home... you coming Daiki?"
Zzzzzz.... Wha... Yea Sure!, Sorry I feel asleep watching the race!
"Really you missed the whole thing?"
"Yup, Sorry"
"Ugghhhh it's ok, Lets Go!"
"Ok Then!"

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"Hey man i'm racing against Supercars tonight, Can I borrow your NSX!"
"Sure as long as you dont Wreck it"
"Trust Me I Wont"
"Ok if you promise!"
"I do, Hey do you know where Satoru moved too?"
"Sorry no Idea!"
"Ok, Where is the NSX?"
"In the garage!"
"Ok, Can I have the keys?
"Sure here you go!"
"Ok im going down to the garage!"
"Ok!
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"It got a few upgrades since the last the time I saw it"
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Thanks To ZDUPH For Driving the Insight :D
 
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Great chapter, definately liking the hybrid racing. :D I have to ask, what game did that NSX come from? :boggled:
 
It came from shift 2, the next chapter will be full of images from that game!
You like the NSX?

Really? I was expecting some unknown budget title because it looks a bit jagged compared to most high end racing games. :ill:

I'd give it a 7/10. :P
 
Really? I was expecting some unknown budget title because it looks a bit jagged compared to most high end racing games. :ill:

I'd give it a 7/10. :P
True But It is Mainly because the Photo mode doesn't do the cars justice! But yea its definatly not as good looking as GT5!
 
Good chapter, I'm surprised to see an Insight do so well.
 
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Red Text - Takeshi
Green Text - Takeshi's Friend
Black Text - A.I. Drivers
Cyan Text - Doctor
Purple Text - Emergency Operator
Orange Text - Security

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"Thanks so much, I promise I won't wreck it!"
"Your Welcome, please dont I spent 5.6 million Yen on it!"
"You can trust me... Friend!"
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"Ok just like I was told against supercars!"
"Damn there are some pretty powerful cars here!"

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"That NSX has no chance!, Not A chance in hell!"
"Time to go!"
"Go NSX Go!!!!"

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"WOW! that NSX is faster than I thought!"
"Its definitively modded!"
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"YEA NSX power!!!"
"I Passed a couple of these guys already"

"He passed me!"
"Haha hell yea!"
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"Is that A JUMP...On a street track?"
"No time to BRAKKEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"****!!!! ****!!! ****!!!, IM GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"I CAN'T SEEE!!!, I CAN'T ****ING SEEEEE!!!!!!

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"AAAGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!, **** I'M ON MY SIDE!!!!!!!"
"WOW! WTF happened to that NSX!!!!"
"He's flipping right beside me!!!!"
"****, HE'S ON TOP OF MY GALLARDO!!!!"
"IM GOING TO DIE, GOING TO ****ING DIE"!!!!!!!!
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"He's RUINING my Gallardo!!!!"
"Ok.... I CAN SEE!!!!"
"Thank God... I'm not blind"

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"I'm alive!!!!! YES I'm ****ING alive!
"The car Is wrecked though"
"The body crippled, the Hood is gone and 2 wheels are GONE!!!"
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"I feel awful something is Definitively broken in my body and i'm bleeding!!!!"
"I have to call 119 and request an ambulance FAST!!!!"
[Dials 119]

"Hello you've reached the Honshu Emergency Services, Where is your emergency"
"*Cough* Just off Route 12 *Cough* Highway"
"Ok, Press 1 for Police assistance, Press 2 For Paramedics..... Press 3 For..."
[Presses 2]
"An Ambulance Has Been Dispatched to your location"
"Thank... you"
"I feel light head....ed ....."
"....................................."

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"We're Getting a response!!"
"Are you okay?"

"Wha.... What happened?"
"You crashed your car!"
"I know that, but after that!"
"You passed out and nearly slipped into a Coma!"
"Do I have any serious injuries?"
"2 Broken Ligaments, and bruises and scrapes"
"Do I need surgery?"
"No both It will take 2 months to heel and until then you must stay in the hospital!"
[Doors burst open]
"You ****ing ***hole, you owe me a new NSX with mods"
"Your never getting anything from me ever again, were not even friends anymore!"

"Sir this man nearly DIED!! Can you please leave him in peace he can't handle this right now!"
"No I wanna talk to Takeshi!!"
"Security!!! Can you escort this man out"
"Ok, doc"
"Come with me Sir"

"Fine.... I dont want any trouble then"
"Ok follow me"
"Doctor, I wont die?"
"No, You Wont!"
"Ok..... (sigh)!"

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This is going great so far, keep it up!

By the way, do you mind sharing what program you use to make the title text? I find it appealing.
 
This is going great so far, keep it up!

By the way, do you mind sharing what program you use to make the title text? I find it appealing.

Its called cooltext.com and its glossy logo!
:D
Theres also other logos to like
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No software download needed only picture downloads
 
Nice chapter, although I'm wondering whether this makes this story a hybrid.
 
Nice chapter, although I'm wondering whether this makes this story a hybrid.

This will only be a small part of the story and the story will focus on other characters own stories as well! And don't worry this story is in GT time so 2 months isnt very long (aka 1-2 weeks)
 
Brutal crash! :D I'm liking how it's constantly crossing over with other games now. Very different from the norm. 👍
 
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