TSD - 2 - Details, my man. Details.

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Err, so here's my new fan fic. I'm genuinely, genuinely, hoping that I would stick with this. So let's move on to explaining about the fanfic. :)

This fanfic, The Speed Devil, is not just a regular fanfic. It's more of a mix of people's chapters, transformed into one of mine. Let's say Hashiriya, The Final Fight, i'd be using my story's car and Miki would be using maybe the same car but everything else would be the same as Hashiriya, the track and the events aka the explosion of Miki's car. I'll put the inspiration at the credits area. :) So, let's move to the Contents!

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Announcer: "Well folks, we are on the final lap of this years' Grand Prix of Endurance in Le Mans, France. It looks like the Audi's have this one... WAIT, WAIT A MINUTE! Coming through the Porsche curves is the #2 Peugeot, driven by none other than Kate Schmitz!"

"The German is the youngest driver to win the Le Mans Series Championship at just 19 years of age! She's stormed past the first two Audi's, but Tom Kristensen isn't giving in! Coming through to the finish line, they're neck and neck, and the winner will be..."

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!

Automated alarm plays - "Baby, baby, baby ooh..."

"Oh god, just shut up alarm! You gotta be kidding me."

Hello. As you may of already figured out, I'm Kate, Kate Schmitz. I'm 18 years old, and there's two things I really like: Cars, and learning about more cars. Doesn't make much sense, but oh well. I have been racing since I got my Super License, and have been enjoying it ever since. Legal racing, that is.



This is my place, just 50 miles from Tokyo, in the serene town of Shoren-in. (BTW, avoid the club Dragonfly AT ALL COSTS, or else you'll wake up with your leg hurting like crazy and your watch will be gone due to some drunkards.)

"Gahh, hagarh."

And that's the sound of me waking up at 9:00 AM. As I lift myself up out of bed, I hear the sound of crying. What could it be, an intruder? Something stolen?

TV: "ハヤテは、私を放置しないでください。私はあなたを愛して..."

Nope, it's my mom and sister going through the usual morning ritual of watching Japanese dramas.

At around 11:00 AM, after eating breakfast, the dramas were finally over.

"So sad..."

"Yeah, something's sad, alright..."

This is my sister, Catherine.

"Maybe you should watch with us sometime."

"I'd honestly rather have Nyan Cat play forever on http://nyan.cat/"

I'm usually a nice guy, but will tell it like it is. Right at that moment, I heard my phone ringing. I went to receive it.

"Sylvia, what's the matter?"

"Dude, don't you know what time it is?!"

"Dang, I totally forgot! Bye guys! Me and Syl are going down to the track!"

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"Hey, wait for me!"

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What do you guys think? This is still in testing process, but if you guys like it, I might continue!
 
You've started a lot of fan fics, but this idea is different. I like the idea, I'll keep up with this. 👍

Feels strange reading something based no Speed's story, since I read all of it in February or January. Great starting choice. 👍 But I don't see how you can connect it all, it could get a little hectic.
 
You've started a lot of fan fics, but this idea is different. I like the idea, I'll keep up with this. 👍

Feels strange reading something based no Speed's story, since I read all of it in February or January. Great starting choice. 👍 But I don't see how you can connect it all, it could get a little hectic.

It is based on speed, but it's not always gonna be connected. I'm still gonna create some original chapters. :)
 
Just to clarify: Miki's car burst into flames in Final Fight. Other than that, this is a promising start.
 
So you're running TSD and The Crazy Expensive Car at the same time?
 
I don't like the fact that it says Devil, like the Blue line, and that the driver is 19, like Ryou, and they're somewhat similar. 👎 I don't like this. . .



















I kid, sorry if you took that seriously. :lol: I know I gave you permission, I know. :p

It's good. 👍
 
I don't like the fact that it says Devil, like the Blue line, and that the driver is 19, like Ryou, and they're somewhat similar. 👎 I don't like this. . .



















I kid, sorry if you took that seriously. :lol: I know I gave you permission, I know. :p

It's good. 👍

Mine is 18 and Ryou is 19. A year difference. LOL!
 

Haha! And now, to the next chapter that tells the story of my dear Kate Schmitz.



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*over FaceTime*

"Hey Syl, the mountains or freeway?"
"The mountains, derp. I wanna drift."

*conversation ends*

We are headed for Trial Mountain for one of our usual weekend track days. It's one of the places where you can really put your foot down and well, drive without anyone complaining. Well, except the enviromentalists, because the track is located in the mountains.

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As you can see, my weapon of choice is a '02 Honda NSX-R. No, i'm not some rich playboy from Fast and Furious. I actually won it from someone with that kind of mentality. In fact, I remember it like it was just an hour ago...



~ Commentator - "And Kate Schmitz in her little Swift dominates the NSX!"
"Bitch. I'm gonna get you sooner or later."
"Let's see who's the real idiot."




~ Commentator - "And to the second to last corner with Schmitz still leading! Who will win this exciting pinkslip?"
"LOL! Wheelspin, she's bound to lose..."
"If i'm bound to lose, why aren't you overtaking me?"
"Well bitch, you'll be mine soon..."



~ Commentator - "And now at the chicane! Will Schmitz win? We think so!"
"Let's see who really shines here."
"🤬... I'm bound to lose.



I closed my eyes... to find out by the commentator that I won.

~ Commentator - "And Schmitz wins this exciting pinkslip!"
Yes!
"How am I going to explain to Mama... help!"

I was still laughing at his reaction when he lost and passed me the keys when Syl suddenly disrupted it and screamed via her iPhone.

"Are you looking? I'm drifffftinggg!!!"



Sigh. Sylvia was a girl that wasn't a normal racer. Sure, she races, but she hosts drift races. Everyone were given Comfort Hard tyres and it pretty much functioned like a normal grippy race.

And there she is, drifting at another corner.



Soon, we arrived at the track.

~ Race Marshall - "Names and cars?"
"Kate Schmitz, Honda NSX-R '02."
"Sylvia Geret, Nissan Silvia S15."
~ Race Marshall - "Kate Schmitz? Any relation to Sabine Schmitz?"
"Nope, but an aspiration to be like her."
~ Race Marshall - "You are clear. Schmitz is in Heat 12 and Geret will be in Heat 15."

After registration, we parked our cars in the pits and wait.

"Hey Kate, you know you gave the Swift to Jenny right?"
"Yeah."
"How is her training going?"
"Ummmmm... let me illustrate it for you."

"Jenny, SLOW DOWN!! DON'T CUTTTTT!!!!!!!"
"Whee! This is fun!!"



"WHAT THE 🤬 ARE YOUUUU DOINNNGGGG!!!!"



"NNNNNOOOO DONNN'TTT REVERRSEEE!!!"
"Woohoo! So fun trying to get my sister sick!



"OKKKAYYYY STOPPPP!! I WANT TO PUKE!!!!!"
"I better, I wouldn't want puke in my new car."



I ran out of the car and puked in the sand.

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"Serious?"
"Yep."
"That is such sick driving! I need to learn a thing or two from her!"
~ Commentator - "Can all drivers in Heat 12 come into the grid?"
"It's my turn. Bye."

As I got ready for the rolling start, my mouth opened. Wide.



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Oh - and by the way...

 
I assume the race comes next....you're expecting a Bugatti to lose to an NSX?
 
I assume the race comes next....you're expecting a Bugatti to lose to an NSX?

No spoilers, sorry. But what I can tell you is that the NSX corners perfectly but the Bugatti understeers like hell.
 
Speaking of the NSX, you want it back? I forgot to send it, so if you want it, I'll send it now…
 
What tyres is that NSX using if it corners perfectly?
 
Speaking of the NSX, you want it back? I forgot to send it, so if you want it, I'll send it now…

Nope. You can have it! Sell it or anything. I didn't want it anyway because I recently began to dislike carbon bonnets.

What tyres is that NSX using if it corners perfectly?

Why are you insulting RKM's NSX 3rd Anniversary? :(
 
Crap, I had no idea it was the 3rd Anniversary NSX, but from experience NSXs seem to enjoy fishtailing.
 
THAT WAS MY NSX YOU GOT FROM ME. ONBOY123??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah well. Blast it to smithereens. And there shall be an easter egg between NGE and TSD.
 
It had to be fair. :(

Yes, fair. Fair as in putting that shopping cart on slicks, SRF on and then handing the nsx over with…let's see, sport soft tyres, power limited to 79%, nothing done to any other part of the car and yet it was only down by a second :lol: :D

Whoops, did I just reveal everything?? :D
 
Yes, fair. Fair as in putting that shopping cart on slicks, SRF on and then handing the nsx over with…let's see, sport soft tyres, power limited to 79%, nothing done to any other part of the car and yet it was only down by a second :lol: :D

Whoops, did I just reveal everything?? :D

WTF... :lol: I just had to win for my story :lol:

And you are having a fit, due to the side effects of being in the Federation of International Tuners. No. Bad pun. :(
 
WTF... :lol: I just had to win for my story :lol:

And you are having a fit, due to the side effects of being in the Federation of International Tuners. No. Bad pun. :(

:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol: I know, I know :D I don't mind, besides, 1 second down at the end of lap 1 wasn't too bad…
 
:( I deleted my words as mistake. 95% of Trois is gone... :( I'll post it tomorrow, too grumpy to do it now.
 
NSX vs Veyron at Trial? Even if it's wingless, that's still a walk in the park for an NSX, especially mine which was tuned there! :lol:

Also women driving NSX's is an instant win, so 👍 to you sir!
 
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