Final flash design online!

[Super-Supra]

www.sunnydesign.tk

It's all Flash MXly made. Not much graphical content.

 

[toyomatt84]

Not bad, I love the setup and the color scheme. Nice work.

 

[Cobraboy]

Your choice of fonts is bad, do you want people to ruin their eyes trying to read your page?

 

[Matrixhasu77]

Erm.. up the pixel size for your text(especially that first page). I can't read it. Also, some sort of clear navigation other than the arrows would be great. I had no idea where I was going using those.

 

[Super-Supra]

But pixel fonts are suppose to be 8px.

Originally posted by Cobraboy
Your choice of fonts is bad, do you want people to ruin their eyes trying to read your page?

I see it perfectly with 1280 x 1024 on a 17" monitor.

So it should be pretty good with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768!

 

[skip0110]

I like it, including the fonts. My only suggestion would be to have some kind of rollover effect on the links so they stand out more.

 

[Matrixhasu77]

Originally posted by Super-Supra
But pixel fonts are suppose to be 8px.




I see it perfectly with 1280 x 1024 on a 17" monitor.

So it should be pretty good with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768!

I run the exact same resolution although on a 19" monitor and I can't really read it. IMO, font size shouldn't be lower than around 12px.

 

[Super-Supra]

Originally posted by skip0110
I like it, including the fonts. My only suggestion would be to have some kind of rollover effect on the links so they stand out more.

Well, what I'll do is remove the Copyright 2004 on the bottom and replace it with Navigation or something.

 

[Spock]

errr, im going to go with no on this site, the setup you used for it ( no navigation links, you must go thought the entire site to get to a page, ect) was really bad, please update it and give it some nav buttons, so readers (it looks like your reading a book) can be surfers and go to where they want on your site.

 

[Super-Supra]

Alright, when I start working on the second version I'll keep all of the comments in mind.

 

[Spock]

Originally posted by Super-Supra
Alright, when I start working on the second version I'll keep all of the comments in mind.

Damn Right you will, cause your current site just plain sucks!

not that i could do any better though .

 

[ALPHA]

Afew Crits

1. The text on the main page is times New Roman and is too small, change it to like Verdana or something.

2. How come the logo on the main page has jaggy bits, like on the curves - anti alias them now!

3. To stop the pixel fonts going blurry position the text box on exact amounts of pixels like x=4 and y=32 not x=3.8 and y= 31.5 oh and to fix it even more change the text type from static text to dynamic or something like that.

4. Get a navagation, for each page put it on a new scene in flash and each button just has to go to the scene with the gotoandplay actionscript. - Easy Peasy.

Good start.

 

[Super-Supra]

I'm still learning flash, as you can tell. I'll try different fonts.