My Pencil Drawings

[daytroxative]

this is my second car drawing i've done, it is a bmw 3.5csl i think the year is '78 its fully customized everythings changed on it, even the tail lights.. tell me what you think i take criticism well..

 

[eddieturner2002]

Originally posted by daytroxative
this is my second car drawing i've done, it is a bmw 3.5csl i think the year is '78 its fully customized everythings changed on it, even the tail lights.. tell me what you think i take criticism well..

my criticism is that you haven't even attached the image

 

[daytroxative]

so im gonna resize

 

[daytroxative]

too big so im gonna resize

 

[daytroxative]

not sure if its in production but it was proposed... so I drew it to match my other '78 CSL.... its not finished ill take suggestion for rims, and anything else you can think... i might add a background.

 

[daytroxative]

CRITICIZE ME!! this is is almost the way i want it....

 

[milefile]

The top one is okay, the bottom one kind of sucks. But I can tell you have potential. Your shading has a clue, and this proves you will learn and get better. Nice job.

 

[daytroxative]

it looks better high res.. alot better you can see all the shading better. i have large png's of both drawings if anyone need a closer look, btw.. these are only my second and third drawings of cars... they will improve...i'm starting to draw a whole bunch, any car i see worth drawing... after these bmw's are done i'll design my own from every perspective... i also wanna create my own 3d models of cars (not real life, simulated 3D)

 

[KosmikFool]

Good, but the proportions are waay off.

 

[oosacker]

I think you should use boxes to get proportion right.