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Honda Civic 2008 Type R
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Dodge Viper Coupe '06

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Dodge Challenger SRT8 '08
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VW Lupo GTi Cup Car '02
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I think some of these pics looks quality, but clearly you guys don't as your not looking at them
 
There's a subforum for photo galleries. If you posted it in the right area, you'd get views. Bumping a thread with a reply complaining about no replies isn't going to help your cause, that's spam here.

Here's a view though since you really wanted one. Your pics are blurry, especially your first set. You need to make sure you hit square to focus on your target before taking the pic. Also, F stop will account for your focal range. That post in your first pic, killin it, sorry.

Your Lupo shots have tangent lines. Tangent lines are when you have an element lining up perfectly with the edge, or another feature. It's very distracting. In your case, the edges of the car are just hitting the edge of your image. Either cut it off with obvious intent, or make sure theres negative space in there.

Your Evo pic with the pigeons, not too interesting. If the pigeons were in focus, it would make sense. Right now, the car is in focus, but it's not interesting to look at. I really want to look at the ground right in front of it, but that's not interesting at all. Last Evo pic is probably your best shot. Composition is good, and the cool filter is working. I would have pushed the exposure up a little bit, and turned your wheels the other way. You generally want to show off the rim, not your tire tread.
 
There's a subforum for photo galleries. If you posted it in the right area, you'd get views. Bumping a thread with a reply complaining about no replies isn't going to help your cause, that's spam here.

Here's a view though since you really wanted one. Your pics are blurry, especially your first set. You need to make sure you hit square to focus on your target before taking the pic. Also, F stop will account for your focal range. That post in your first pic, killin it, sorry.

Your Lupo shots have tangent lines. Tangent lines are when you have an element lining up perfectly with the edge, or another feature. It's very distracting. In your case, the edges of the car are just hitting the edge of your image. Either cut it off with obvious intent, or make sure theres negative space in there.

Your Evo pic with the pigeons, not too interesting. If the pigeons were in focus, it would make sense. Right now, the car is in focus, but it's not interesting to look at. I really want to look at the ground right in front of it, but that's not interesting at all. Last Evo pic is probably your best shot. Composition is good, and the cool filter is working. I would have pushed the exposure up a little bit, and turned your wheels the other way. You generally want to show off the rim, not your tire tread.

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Someone is upset.

Constructive critisism, just sayin'.


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There's a subforum for photo galleries. If you posted it in the right area, you'd get views. Bumping a thread with a reply complaining about no replies isn't going to help your cause, that's spam here.

Here's a view though since you really wanted one. Your pics are blurry, especially your first set. You need to make sure you hit square to focus on your target before taking the pic. Also, F stop will account for your focal range. That post in your first pic, killin it, sorry.

Your Lupo shots have tangent lines. Tangent lines are when you have an element lining up perfectly with the edge, or another feature. It's very distracting. In your case, the edges of the car are just hitting the edge of your image. Either cut it off with obvious intent, or make sure theres negative space in there.

Your Evo pic with the pigeons, not too interesting. If the pigeons were in focus, it would make sense. Right now, the car is in focus, but it's not interesting to look at. I really want to look at the ground right in front of it, but that's not interesting at all. Last Evo pic is probably your best shot. Composition is good, and the cool filter is working. I would have pushed the exposure up a little bit, and turned your wheels the other way. You generally want to show off the rim, not your tire tread.

Spot on, learn how to use the focus as your cars are just a tad to blurry, i must say i like the 2 lupo shots alot though. But yea, its the blurriness thats killing it. 👍
 
You have some good ideas, they're just not executed well, off focus, bad framing. Also, Filters don't make a good picture, they just add to it. Try having a smaller depth of field, changing the brightness and angle, go extremely wide, or super zoomed in, and have the car share the subject of the picture with the architecture or scenery.
 
Spot on, learn how to use the focus as your cars are just a tad to blurry, i must say i like the 2 lupo shots alot though. But yea, its the blurriness thats killing it. 👍

Thank you. To others that read this, feel free to send me your stuff if you want a serious critique. Like I said, I enjoy critiquing these images.
 
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