sample sheet.. advice plz?

[suzq044]

i'd like to know what else to do to it to make it stand out? right now its just this on plain white paper..

comments/criticism/suggestions appreciated
--susan

 

[emad]

It seems good, but to me, it seems that there's too much black at the top and left and a lot more color at the bottom and right.

You could consider putting the Eclipse & Hot-Rod in the middle and rearranging the other items around them...

 

[suzq044]

updated..

 

[emad]

If the blurred bit at the bottom is your contact info, it doesn't stand out very well. Consider doing it in multiple lines at the top right as well as the bottom...

 

[MagpieRacer]

omg! sorry to take it off topic but i had no idea you were female! wow! *back on topic*

I love the eclipse, but couldnt the white be made into a light shade of a colour? like pale blue or something.

 

[emad]

I love the eclipse, but couldnt the white be made into a light shade of a colour? like pale blue or something.

On a monitor, it would look great. On paper, it would be awful because printers don't like solids too much and it would look extremely unprofessional.

 

[suzq044]

actually it came out just like it is on the monitor.. gotta love laser printers
edit: as far as the blue thing goes, i could always use blue paper, but i think that'd look bad, considering this is consistant with my resume' design.

you can buy the shirt i made with the eclipse [link in sig]

 

[MagpieRacer]

Suzq, i added you to msn if you didnt mind

 

[franz]

wow susan ... you actually put your work into t-shirt production
that's sweet!
I have a question .... do you have to vectorize all the graphics for your tshirt design?
because I saw you have 2 STI photos that from GT4

 

[cardude2004]

suzq, your work looks great. I like that second style sheet more than the first.

 

[suzq044]

thanks guys and yeah.. they take raster art too