Whats rong wit this?

[Gen.]

hey dudes i just made a trial run of a beemer can you help me fix the faults (apart from the bad digital video camera problem)
BMW Drift

 

[vinkento]

Looks like you've got this "Drifting" thing down pretty well, just keep practicing I say. Maybe the hairpin could use some work, try starting it a little out more and bringing the drift inside of the turn.

 

[Gen.]

yea i can never get that specific hairpin can someone show me a line through that ??

 

[Gen.]

y isnt nebody rerplying

 

[nk4e]

nothing, just practice

 

[Gen.]

cool... rekn i will do good in the next drift comp?

 

[nk4e]

thats ur decision

 

[Gen.]

i mean how would i compare to everyone else on the next tourney, will i keep up with everybody or get totally thrashed?

 

[milefile]

Whats rong wit this?

Let's see... You forgot the apostrophe in the word "what's", you misspelled "wrong", and you misspelled "with". Glad to help.

 

[ForcedInduction]

har har funny...
"Glad to help."
(Fragment; consider revising)

Edit: As for the forum help, i think you should start the drifts a little earlier instead of starting to get sideways after you're into the turn already...smoother counter-steer with little bit of feint motion shouldn't hurt

 

[Gen.]

ive been meaning to get the drifts in faster but im just abit paranoid about it, and feinting? IM sick of that i have it in every other repla i have i just decided to not do it much in this replay