Keef
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This is a great car/track combination. Another big update, too, and this time I'll start with the bad, or at least not good, aspects of the set.
I'm not really a big fan of shots where the car is obstructed from view, like when cresting a hill or when it's behind a fence, as is the case with #3. It might look better with a car that had a horizontal, straight line design theme, maybe like the Cien. But this elise is very curvy, almost cartoon-like, so it doesn't blend well with a basic, industrial, crappy looking fence.
I'm not sure which editing program you use right now. I use Photoshop 7.0, which has a "heal" tool. You take a sample in a different area and repaint the picture, starting from that point, on top of what you want to remove. Then it blends the healed spot smooth. Like you're moving the picture over on top of itself in a different spot. It does an amazing job in most situations for removing names and such. Anyways, I would have healed the ledge out of the top right corner of #8. It's too busy with your sig. If you wanted to keep it there, though, you should have put your sig in the bottom left corner. It's a spot that doesn't get noticed and isn't obstructive. I see you also tried to get rid of the SCEA thing. Oh well, I'm going to make this my wallpaper so I'll just fix it for me.
I wish you would have taken two pics for #11. The second one could have been focused on the top of the hill with the car having a motion blur, like it's speeding through the esses really fast. I think that'd be neat.
You should pay more attention to sig placement. I got on Sejtur about that a while back. I'm not a photographer or anything, I just don't like an interesting part of the pic interrupted by a name. Numbers 14 and 15 both would look better with the sig in the bottom left.
That might look like a lot of bad stuff, but most of it is trivial, so don't worry. Here comes the good stuff, which kicks the bad stuffs' asses.
You should tell FoMoCo (Ford Motor Company) to change it's symbol to the one in #2. They are really colorful, yet still blue. It just looks really cool.
I love the cloudless sky which is in many photos. I looks so peaceful. All until that damn Lotus tears through it going 150+!
The 6th, 7th, and 8th pics all have that peaceful sky and look tropical and stuff. #8 is in my top 3 favorites, if not the most, of this set.
Number 10 has a great sense of speed. I always hav loved the vents and stuff on the top of those cars that you don't get to see often. I just like the colors and composition and everything. Top 3 for me.
The Lotus banners are pretty appropriate in #12. It's a nice touch. I like the mix of colors. The green, yellow, blue, black, and white all go good together.
The last photo, #17, is in my top 3, definitely. It's so complicated! I love it. I looks like a still shot from a TV commercial or something. A picture right out of the Lotus brochure. So modern and it has a great engineering feel to it; I guess that's from the entrance into the parking garage. Did you make this one just for me, cause I love modern straight lines and stuff. And the silhouette of the car looks distorted and stretched. That turned out looking cool, also.
By the way, which link do you use to post your big pics? I know, I know "why don't you try them and find out?" right? Yaaawwwwwwwnnn. I'm too tired.
I'm not really a big fan of shots where the car is obstructed from view, like when cresting a hill or when it's behind a fence, as is the case with #3. It might look better with a car that had a horizontal, straight line design theme, maybe like the Cien. But this elise is very curvy, almost cartoon-like, so it doesn't blend well with a basic, industrial, crappy looking fence.
I'm not sure which editing program you use right now. I use Photoshop 7.0, which has a "heal" tool. You take a sample in a different area and repaint the picture, starting from that point, on top of what you want to remove. Then it blends the healed spot smooth. Like you're moving the picture over on top of itself in a different spot. It does an amazing job in most situations for removing names and such. Anyways, I would have healed the ledge out of the top right corner of #8. It's too busy with your sig. If you wanted to keep it there, though, you should have put your sig in the bottom left corner. It's a spot that doesn't get noticed and isn't obstructive. I see you also tried to get rid of the SCEA thing. Oh well, I'm going to make this my wallpaper so I'll just fix it for me.
I wish you would have taken two pics for #11. The second one could have been focused on the top of the hill with the car having a motion blur, like it's speeding through the esses really fast. I think that'd be neat.
You should pay more attention to sig placement. I got on Sejtur about that a while back. I'm not a photographer or anything, I just don't like an interesting part of the pic interrupted by a name. Numbers 14 and 15 both would look better with the sig in the bottom left.
That might look like a lot of bad stuff, but most of it is trivial, so don't worry. Here comes the good stuff, which kicks the bad stuffs' asses.
You should tell FoMoCo (Ford Motor Company) to change it's symbol to the one in #2. They are really colorful, yet still blue. It just looks really cool.
I love the cloudless sky which is in many photos. I looks so peaceful. All until that damn Lotus tears through it going 150+!
The 6th, 7th, and 8th pics all have that peaceful sky and look tropical and stuff. #8 is in my top 3 favorites, if not the most, of this set.
Number 10 has a great sense of speed. I always hav loved the vents and stuff on the top of those cars that you don't get to see often. I just like the colors and composition and everything. Top 3 for me.
The Lotus banners are pretty appropriate in #12. It's a nice touch. I like the mix of colors. The green, yellow, blue, black, and white all go good together.
The last photo, #17, is in my top 3, definitely. It's so complicated! I love it. I looks like a still shot from a TV commercial or something. A picture right out of the Lotus brochure. So modern and it has a great engineering feel to it; I guess that's from the entrance into the parking garage. Did you make this one just for me, cause I love modern straight lines and stuff. And the silhouette of the car looks distorted and stretched. That turned out looking cool, also.
By the way, which link do you use to post your big pics? I know, I know "why don't you try them and find out?" right? Yaaawwwwwwwnnn. I'm too tired.
. Overall I think its a nice and well composed update 
