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[Zach]

Hey. It's pretty good, just to let you know. Though i'd suggest some other names such as "The Green Hell" or "24hrs of the Green Hell", at least you chose a pretty good name. I'd suggest if you had a bit of originality when it comes to the plot. You could start as a street racer. Not necessary to be a track racer.

Zach

 

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[rhys159]

Nice, looking forward to more. By the way, it's overtook, not overtaked.

 

[galanmg]

Nice, looking forward to more. By the way, it's overtook, not overtaked.

I'm gonna "put" ( i don't know if it's said like that) online the next chapter by now, so you will not have to wait much time.

THANKS, I didn't really know if overtake is a regular or irregular verb, now I can write it correctly (i'm spanish with a medium level of english)

 

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[Zach]

Great galanmg! This is pure originality. I can see how it pans out!

 

[galanmg]

Great galanmg! This is pure originality. I can see how it pans out!

Thanks a lot zacharysim !! Tomorrow I´ll translate the 4th chapter, now i´ m writing the 9th in spanish.

 

[Zach]

Haha, how I think it pans out is that the racing club is like a team and they arrange races for every driver. So, they'll arrange the Nurb 24hrs.

 

[galanmg]

Haha, how I think it pans out is that the racing club is like a team and they arrange races for every driver. So, they'll arrange the Nurb 24hrs.

Ssshhh it's a secret.... But it's more or less the way that you say

 

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