Corruption-The Return of X

[Machate-man]

*Seeing that my developmental prototype story died in a bout of writer's block, I'm starting this. Please vote on the poll*

*The first few pages will be 'backstory'*

 

[Zach]

Congrats Machate. Hope this goes well. Love the touch of documents.

 

[Machate-man]

*John's proposal for a GT Police force*

 

[Zach]

Wow. Simply wow.

 

[Machate-man]

Wow. Simply wow.

As in 'amazing'? or amazingly boring?

 

[DK]

They're going to have a lot on their hands trying to take down some of Japan's top street racers...

 

[Machate-man]

 

[Machate-man]

 

[Skython]

I like where this one's going, awesome work man 👍

 

[Machate-man]

I like where this one's going, awesome work man 👍

Thanks
This FanFic's going to be rather text heavy, and the majority of the pictures you're going to see are in the form of those documents.

 

[Onboy123]

Just a bit of advice, can you make the 'documents' slightly smaller? Because everytime I try to view this thread my whole laptop lags like hell, and when I try it on my phone, it crashes…

 

[Machate-man]

Prologue​

April 2nd
During construction of the toll booths that will make up the R-7 autodome, A full carbon Zonda somehow slips through the security. One Patrol car pursuits after it.

The Patrol car catches up to the Zonda, going at a leisurely 200 km/h
The officer pulls his radio
Any CPT units in the area, I have visual on a full carbon Zonda-

What's that you say, Gilbert?
I have sight of a full carbon Zonda, John. Perhaps it's th-

I'll be there. Dont call backup; I'm all the help you would ever need. ETA 3 min-OUT

John readies his GT-R, and grabs his silenced .45 as well.

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Eventually, Gilbert stops the Zonda, Just when John's car is seen in the distance.

Spoiler

Mal, you remember what I told you?
Just tell me again.
You'll stay in the car until you hear me. Then you'll walk out. Just don't stand parallel to me and the cop, So that I have a clear view.
OK...

The Patrol car and the Zonda stop in the middle of the road.
OK! COME OUT WITH YER HANDS UP!
Gilbert readies his standard-issue tazer

Then John's Patrol car stops. He gets out, Yells MAL!, Then pulls his .45

A man in a red racing suit with a carbon-fibre helmet slowly walks to the front of the Zonda. He then gives a nod to John.

John carefully aims the .45 at Gilbert's head, then then fires off one round.
The bullet goes clean through his head, spare some rather gory details, however.

A spray of blood covers the visor of the man.
He then promptly takes it off, revealing a face resembling Vettel.
According to plan?
Yep. And just for good measure...
John goes into the back of his car, and pulls out a large block of C4.
Meh, talk about overkill... Mal says as John places it under Gilbert's car.


Precisely. Now, To get you out of here, I'll appear to chase you, and call off any backup. We'll end up at Ensamble heat-free.

Sounds good to me.

Hmph..a smirk appears on John's mustached face. It's good to see you again.

The two get in their cars, and John fires up his sirens.

 

[Machate-man]

Make sense of this and you have the key to the whole story (just dont say anything in the thread)

 

[DK]

Ooh...so, what will happen next?

 

[Machate-man]

Just a bit of advice, can you make the 'documents' slightly smaller? Because everytime I try to view this thread my whole laptop lags like hell, and when I try it on my phone, it crashes…

Sorry...I exported them from PDFs into JPEGs, and they naturally come that size. I'll try to make them smaller.

 

[Zach]

I don't understand...

 

[Machate-man]

I don't understand...

It will slowly unfold as the story progresses. Dont worry, you'll understand eventually

 

[Skython]

I think I get it, it means ..............................

















What, I'm not telling

 

[uMadson?]

I understand the plan, but not the plan map.

 

[Zach]

Reading it again, I think I get it...

 

[Machate-man]

*The official flyer for the search of Malcovitch Vincente. Print 5 copies out and stick them somewhere with high traffic. (Library, school, ect)*


Drivers with the Gran Turismo Skyline GT-R Pace car should Private Message machate-man of GTPlanet for later contacting.

It means PM me if you have the car, just in case I need some stunt drivers

 

[Machate-man]

Welcome to the Gran-Turismo International Police System​

Username:2nd Comm..../..-
Password:*******

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Clearance Granted
Welcome Acting Commander Sylvia Anderson
Search______________

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Searching "Project Zonda X"

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Showing Most recent articles over last 3 months Containing "Zonda X" ....


8/3/07
Montserrat, Spain
Officer Xavier Fiero
K.I.A During Chase with Zonda X. High Speed collision caused Fatality


9/18/07
Le Mans, France
Thomas May
Severly Injured in chase with Zonda X. Sideswiped into guardrail and collision head-on with Parked Patrol Car Roadblock.


9/21/07
Ivory Coast, Italy
Kevin Anderson
Found Shot and Crashed after examining an emergency call concerning Zonda X.



9/30/07
Benchmark High Speed Ring, Mojave Desert, USA
Zonda X Spotted by passerby going 400+


10/15/07
Laguna Seca Mazda Speedway, Monterey, USA
Zonda X Spotted by Track official before closing.

3/3 Results shown.

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Pictures courtesy "Forza Motorsport Photography" Cameras

 

[Skython]

Great work Mate, but why did you use Forza? Did it just work better?

 

[Machate-man]

Great work Mate, but why did you use Forza? Did it just work better?

I can admit that Forza has much better crash simulations...but that's it

 

[Skython]

I can admit that Forza has much better crash simulations...but that's it

I would have to agree with that actually. Forza also has their epic track, that Fuji Kaido. So epic.

 

[DK]

I can admit that Forza has much better crash simulations...but that's it

True dat.

Forza also has their epic track, that Fuji Kaido.

I would happily trade in the Madrid circuits for a touge track in GT5.

On-topic, nice chapter.

 

[Machate-man]

See, the thing is that I'm at my grandpa's place until tuesday, and that was the only gaming console there

And YES! Fujimi Kaido is DA BOMB

*Odd how all of the crashes look alike...

 

[Korza]

I'm loving the new fanfic format! Keep it up!!

 

[Machate-man]

Chapter 0.5:Memories​

Sylvia is sitting in her cubicle in GT Police's Japan Headquarters with a migrane.

Sigh, "I wonder why John is in charge...
She looks around at her desk, which is a mess of papers, most of which are applications for the police academy, and some which "were" her boyfriend's love letters, that are now just crumpled wads of paper.

On her computer screen is the file for Kevin Anderson's death; her brother. She had mourned the sudden death of Kevin, yet it didn't seem to impede on her life.

Sylvia then looks up to a small portrait of her and her 'sister':

Flashback
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"The Sylvia Sisters", they used to call them. Two extremely skilled women in the sport of drifting. Drifting was their drug, and they Loved it.

Sylvia Anderson
and
Sylvia Tano

The couple would enter the track with arms interlocked, give each other a kiss, then enter their cars.

Their S13s roared to life-

Flashback to be continued
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Sylvia gets up, walks towards John's glass-shielded office space, and opened his door.

John, on the phone, looks up at Sylvia:
"-imi Kaido is a bit-"
Sees her angry face
"Sorry, give me a moment"
*click*
"Yes?"
"I need a break."
"Well, you know the rules. It comes out of your sick-leave and you dont get pai-
"Yayaya, I got it. Later"
"Fine then,...I just hope you dont end up like your brother...
Hearing this, Sylvia lashes out at John
"Leave my brother OUT OF THIS! At least my brother wasn't a criminal!

Sylvia Stomps out of the office, straight into the garage.
John, unphased by the argument, goes on to discuss classified matters.

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The GT Police Garage is filled with a mix of vehicles, of which:

100 Skyline GT-R Squad cars
35 LFA undercover cars
15 "Lead Golf" Ramming/Roadblock MK4 Golfs
and loads of Confiscated street racing vehicles, like:

Name: AMUSE/HONDA S2000 GT-1 Turbo
Owner: Kentaro "Scar" Suzuki
Power: 600hp
Weight: 1,100kg

And

Name: HONDA Integra Type R DC5-RM
Owner: Miki Watanabe
Power: 300hp
Weight: 980kg

Sylvia, having access to any and all of these vehicles, skips all of them and goes for this:

It's a '54 Mercedes 300 SL in HellBlau, an unusual color for a car in the 50's.
She starts the engine up, and the 50 year old inline-4 buzzes to life.
She then pulls out of the Garage, out into Route 7, and then proceeds to meet with her Sister at the Local "Street Wars" event.

Sylvia pulls out her phone, and calls her sister for the first time in over 3 years:
"Hey!
WTF? WHos this?
OMG how could you forget me?
huh?...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
She's backOMG SHES BACK!
You're back! WHat took you so long?
You know that party you're at? I'm going-
Oh, cool! See you then!
Ya,bye
OXOXOX little sister-

Sylvia hangs up before her sister goes overboard.

 

[uMadson?]

I see something interesting.