You are on exactly the right track, you keep those lines, you keep practicing, exclude any use of the e-brake and you are golden! Great video minus not filling the song, you've got the soul of a drifter and I can tell. Good work, keep it up.
I concur with Vink. just keep doing what you're doing and don't be afraid to push the envelope a little. You'd be suprised how much fun it is out there!