Freestyle.

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it's all about me
and just watch me make u all flood the seen
it's yardie on the look out with his m16
don't watch just run cuz i bust this gun for sure
can't believe u never seen one of these before
it ain't a game i am just reel hadcore
and i am just trying to support this rap galore
i am the rap einstein can create any formula
so don't test me or else i'll get rid of your
this ain't the end of the world it just a disaster
u better run to the church and pray with a pastor
cuz when i am through with this **** there is no after
just a lyrical danger zone
come on don't lie u can feel it in your bone
crushing through felt like a tons of bricks but it was a freestyle stone
and don't feel i am trying i am already in this rap game
just my aim is to make all wanna bees feel hurt and toment in other words intense pain
just be a mastermind and u will see it is simple and plain
 
Originally posted by teamsickspeed
ghost c,
you dont have no real ****..your **** is whack....
your prolly some upbeat white thug thats smokin crack..
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i thought about making a thread like this long ago, but internet battles are gay, only if it was in a live chat room were u can actually spit on the mic then it would be worth it
 
Internet battles are fun, and no matter what unless you're standing there face to face, you can't know that it's actually a real freestyle, people could have stuff written down.
 
whats up people.. I just got from football practice,
i see we have some new rhyming thugz, with whack S***,
I go to school and people thinking they better then me and ghost c,
you think these whack ass rhymes make you an mc,
for what isaw dog, you got murdered on the mike,
for what ive heard, your mom B**** slapped you when you called her a dyke.
and why u gotta be callin ghost c a homo,
you tryin to get in his ass, paying with dough yo?
im not in the mood and am spiting better then you do,
its a life style, keep this S*** up, all you gunna hear is boooooo,
take them ryhmes back to the karoake bar,
just cuzz you can follow someone elses lyrics driving in a car,
dont ever think u got skillz,
come back to me when your ready,here my buisness card, a hundred dollar bill,
dont spend it all in one place,
your a dick ridin, P**** denying B****, you in the hood, why you got mace?
this is the most money you have ever seen,
take my hundred dollar bill, dont spend it all on jim bean,
you drunk alcoholic unlyrically fallin wanna be ballin B****,
u got popped by gost c's nine, i was the one to bury you in the ditch
 
teamsickspeed u aint no mc,
i been spittin dis **** since i was 3,
u prolly dont know who i be,
after u hear my rhymes ya head be buzzing like bees,
cause my rhymes are the best in da 7 seas,
boy i think u gotta get down on yo knees,
cause 2ez2kill gonna smoke u like a tree,
u never be like me,
is it me? or have i heard those rhymes somewhere else?
u cant rap so u just take people rhymes,
thats why everyone be hittin me with dymes,
yo **** prewritten,
someone been spittin,
u be ****ttin,
then u go copy and pastin,
think of all the time they wastin,
all u can do is copy wat they sayin
 
...Why is it "kinda sad"? If you can't actually contribute something to the thread, you shouldn't contribute anything at all.
 
Originally posted by 2ez2KiLL
teamsickspeed u aint no mc,
i been spittin dis **** since i was 3,
u prolly dont know who i be,
after u hear my rhymes ya head be buzzing like bees,
cause my rhymes are the best in da 7 seas,
boy i think u gotta get down on yo knees,
cause 2ez2kill gonna smoke u like a tree,
u never be like me,
is it me? or have i heard those rhymes somewhere else?
u cant rap so u just take people rhymes,
thats why everyone be hittin me with dymes,
yo **** prewritten,
someone been spittin,
u be ****ttin,
then u go copy and pastin,
think of all the time they wastin,
all u can do is copy wat they sayin
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listen to this flea bitten rhyme biting *****,
u say i copy and past my ****, why u followin my flow. your my trucks trailer hitch, your rhymes are weak your ryhmes blow,
u need to mature a little so your rhymes can grow,
im sick and tired of hearing these rookie fake ass gangstas go,
i dont want to hear this fake ass gangsta rap no mo,
dont make me drop the hammer on my colt 45,
put a whole in your chest, you ready to die...
you say my **** is prewritten,
your just mad because the only opportunity ur gettin,
is the one tryin to diss me,
u said my head would be buzzin like bees,
you right. cuzz your **** had no alibi, nor any evidence,
your **** is whack, u cant even vote for our presidents,
u think your grown up u think you got skills,
i know this little ***** from around the way, he talked to much ****... he was 2ez2kill,
 
so basically it's coming up with lyrics ot a new song off the top of your head? I dunno if I can do that, but I congradulate those who can (the difference between rap and rock is that rock actually puts a melody to the words...)
 
Why is it that rap always has a horribly simplistic Dr. Seuss rhyme scheme? If you're going to make crappy music, at least do it intelligently.
 
Can you do better? If so, by all means, join in.

And yes, Jpec, that's what freestyling is. There's just no music at all behind freestyles, most of the time.
 
Yeah no music, no beat
Just talking elite
Ha, you think it takes skill?
Hell no, even your mom can do this drill
Dr Seuss drains fade-away jays on me all day
Nothing I can do but sit back and say "No way!"
It' as simple as that
Slap some words together and voila--something phat
I can do it, you can do it, he can do it
Just gotta use your head a little bit

Snap!
 
...and nobody's addressed my "sellout" comment at all.

Klos, I think you deserve this: :bowdown: and I don't use that lightly.
 
Well, I don't like anyone who puts on an image of something they're not to get money or fame or recognition. I don't do it, and I wouldn't do it if I had a deal, either.
 
I'm a coo freestylin' gangsta
My life is full of blah blah blah
The hood that we be in is so coo
Cuz nobody cares about schoo'
Rhyming is clearly the best
See how it works with "vest"?
I'm so bad because I know how to work a gun
Without 'em me and my phat friends have no fun
Com'n over, have a beer
Oops, my 'sclade is here
I live for da bling bling
(Too bad I can't actually sing)
 
I got something for you, neon_duke
It's so nasty it may make you puke
Jacko went wacko and put his tongue in his mouth
The boy said, "No thank you, and don't go south"
Jacko was persistent you see
"Just eat it" he would say to he
Grossed out thoroughly was the boy
All Mikey wanted was a new toy, a little joy
But no, he can't even have that
The masses just looks at him like a little rat
Small and weak
Just looking for a little something to eat

Nizza rizza.
 
Originally posted by Ghost C
Can you do better?
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I can write poetry better than this crap, but that takes time. I'd love to do something wonderful like Klos, but he beat me to it. I've no desire to be a tag-a-long.
 
But tagging along is fun
No need to do it now as it's all done
But you can still try, try and try
Don't cry and say "Oh my, oh my, oh my"
That's weak and stuff and junk
Like locking someone in your 1991 Grand Marquis, in the trunk
Just think man about all the bling you're missing out on
It's all going to be gone, gone, gone
Shoot, whatever, this is getting out of hand
I'd rather be stranded on a deserted island
 
Sup wit you Klos thinkin ya boss,
Tryin ta spit rhyme but your words are a loss.
You think ya might make it
But they'll find out you fake it
you ain't no composer, you simply a poser.

Runnin ya mouth, tryin ta bring fame,
But your words leave us cold, and out in the rain
So go back to ya roots, hookin on Fifth and Maine.


That's my rhyme. Take it to the streets beeyathc! Haha!
 
Originally posted by boombexus
Sup wit you Klos thinkin ya boss,
Tryin ta spit rhyme but your words are a loss.
You think ya might make it
But they'll find out you fake it
you ain't no composer, you simply a poser.

Runnin ya mouth, tryin ta bring fame,
But your words leave us cold, and out in the rain
So go back to ya roots, hookin on Fifth and Maine.


That's my rhyme. Take it to the streets beeyathc! Haha!
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Watch out we even got a mod rapping!!!
Dont talk about any of them before they ban out asses!!!
 
Had to go to Wal-Mart to buy some socks
Invested all my money like I was buying stocks
Took an hour to get through the line
That's ok though, 'cause the lady's daughter was really fine
She had one of the nicest asses I've ever seen
And a set of legs I wanna get in between
But I couldn't talk to her, all I could say was
"Da-Da-Da-Da-Da-Damn", but that's alright 'cause
She heard my line, and turned to give me a smile
And that made me feel alright, at least for a little while

That was sad. Oh well.
 
Originally posted by Ghost C
Had to go to Wal-Mart to buy some socks
Invested all my money like I was buying stocks
Took an hour to get through the line
That's ok though, 'cause the lady's daughter was really fine
She had one of the nicest asses I've ever seen
And a set of legs I wanna get in between
But I couldn't talk to her, all I could say was
"Da-Da-Da-Da-Da-Damn", but that's alright 'cause
She heard my line, and turned to give me a smile
And that made me feel alright, at least for a little while

That was sad. Oh well.
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Haha, nice one.👍

I cant think right now. Imma go shower.
 
Freestyle this way, freestyle this way
Just piss off and I'll free style my way
I call it the right way, you're the wrong way
I'm like a freight train that can't be stopped
With you the floor gets mopped
There's no denying me
I'm off the heazy
You know, what all the cool cats are saying
All down on their knees and praying
Praying to their Allah, mighty as he is
He can't help them win in this bis'
I'm here, I'm there, I'm everywhere
Omnipresent Jimmy they call me
Jumping from tangent to tangent all while singing my ABCs
Triangles, quadrilaterals, I know all the shapes and stuff
All the mathemeticians bow down to me with a simple huff and a puff
Here I sit wondering to myself
Hmm, what is really up there on that shelf
Could it be your pride?
Yeah, you're pride, it's up there hiding, looking at me like a virgin bride
I seriously don't know what the hell I'm flowing about here
I just pretend to know what I'm doing like a nuclear engineer

What the ****?
 
:eek: OMFG....this is 8 mile all over again :lol:

lol lol lol @ klos :lol:

I'm not into rap but I find this thread really amusing. The only problem I have with rap is the *most* of it (not all) lacks originailty. It's all about guns, Ho's, and fancy cars. One thing I do like is the beat. Personally I think rappers like 50 cent suck. It's all the smae **** just with different words. eminem on the other hand has his own style and is more original.

I've written a few songs (alternative) but they all deal with death, sucide and murder. Which is weird considering I'm a really happy person. I guess it's just easier to focus on the bad aspects of life because they are so common.
 

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