Freestyle.

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Too many "-ism"s :p
Don't really like that... i actually like your other ones better. Good job as of yet. đź‘Ť
 
Originally posted by slk308
Too many "-ism"s :p
Don't really like that... i actually like your other ones better. Good job as of yet. đź‘Ť
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its supposed to be like that, its real hard to do with big words
sorry i dissapointed you
 
Boombexus was all bleeding and cut
You know, from that jelly doughnut
What a mess, I do say
The bastard never even thought to pay
I would have ended it right then and there
But in his eyes I could see his fear
Some may call me a little bit weird, even a bit wacky
But at least I can say I'm not tacky
No sir, not tacky, I'm a class act all the way
Right down Blue Jay Way
I stole and paraphrased that line from a Beatles song
Now you may be thinking that's stupid and wrong
Well, I got news for you little buddy--you're stupid and wrong
Stupid, wrong, stupid, wrong, stupid, wrong
That reminds me, I think Cupid's strong
With out him, boombexus wouldn't be cut all along
I'm out of here, gotta go play some ping-pong
Word up to your mother
 
I'm gonna go, kinda tired.
So i'll be judge again tomoro. Later. :)
 
I won't deny it, I'm a straight rider, you don't wanna **** with me
See they call me the Ghostfaced Criminal, I'm that G that they can't see
Runnin' up on mad wannabes at night in the dark
Clappin' at 'em with this thing that bark
Thought they could roll on me, made 'em think twice
'Cause this .45 that I keep got a little red light
Leveled the laser to their chest
Let off, left a bloody mess
But that's what happens when you mess with Ghost C
Tryin' to make all these cowards see that they can't be me
 
man, GC, c'mon and get with the rythm
'cause you got the rhyme, but that ain't all that you can give 'em
Go with the flow of the beat you can feel
Moving you, consuming you, becoming a real
Rhyme to be rapped off by your mouth
But I'm sure that you've already found out
That you ain't capable of all that you're dreamin'
So give it up, little boy, as you can't seem to keep in
Sync with the rythm, as I've already said
Keep this posing up and you may end up dead
Nobody likes to see a sore loser
Who can't rap for beans, let alone for amusin'
The giant population of boys and girls
Who listen to this crap 'cause they think it turns
The matter in their brains into solid material
When in fact it becomes like a bowl of old cereal
Don't put up a fight, you silly little boy
'Cause you're just a muse, a puppet, a toy
For me to show the world just how it is done
So pack your bags and just start runnin'
Away from this place, as fast as you can
And you better leave soon 'cause you ain't no gingerbread man

Work it out, there's plenty of rythm and a simple 1,1,2,2,3,3... rhyme scheme in it. Let's see what you can to...
 
my ryhme is so sick make you wanna puke a rebel,
my **** comes deep within not from the devil,
im not into tht gansta shooting people ****,
but im not ****ing scared to swing, your gunna get hit,
sprayin **** is for pussys who cant fight,
spraying is for *****es who dont wanna cockfight,
im tired of all these murdurous wayz,
im tired of hearing about people dieing every ****ing day,
im tired of this homosexuall ****,
quit sucking dick, get your own *****,
im tired of going out in crowds and worying about the little kids,
im tired of all the pornagrafic nature, godforbid
im tired of backstabbing friends,
i dont think u get what im saying, you dont comprehend,
people are out of wack these days,
i just want to crawl in a cave and hideaway,
im sick and tired of the bull**** people try to pull,
like not going to school saying it doesnt fit their schedule,
we are going to kill over human kind one year,
half of us will die from the pollution of the atmosphere,
so try and comprehend what im saying to you,
cuzz the picture im trying to paint is long-overdue
 
The rhyme is so sweet, you've found the groove
That you walk in and talk in; it controls your moves
I'm hearin' what you're sayin', dude, don't be trippin'
It's not as though I was tryin' to give you a kick in
The tough-skinned face that is mouthin' off those words
With so many stars that it's barely even heard
Calm your mouth down, control your tongue
'Cause that crap's not gonna help you before this is done
Can't wait to see what you come up with next
Somethin' slightly more impressive is what I'll bet
 
Originally posted by Jpec07
The rhyme is so sweet, you've found the groove
That you walk in and talk in; it controls your moves
I'm hearin' what you're sayin', dude, don't be trippin'
It's not as though I was tryin' to give you a kick in
The tough-skinned face that is mouthin' off those words
With so many stars that it's barely even heard
Calm your mouth down, control your tongue
'Cause that crap's not gonna help you before this is done
Can't wait to see what you come up with next
Somethin' slightly more impressive is what I'll bet
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damn Jpec07, you giving me props,
lemme give you a taste of what i can drop,
u complimenting me ima compliment you,
S*** you so nice i might give you my left shoe,
u got a rythm so hot noone can beat it,
people cant wait to get online so they can read it,
my flows are no match to yours, your S*** is hot,
i know exactly when u flowin all i hear is a gunshot,
from da gloc u holdin, but i dont like that S***,
i know from my previous ryhmes i sound like a hypocrit,
but dont make a fit, i was just startin out,
i had to creat a gansta shell, until u knew what i was about,
you got everyone scared they wont even post,
i havent even seen S***...........from the ghost,
noone can match you no one can compete,
everytime they start they realize they're dead beat,
all you see em do is steady hit delete,
"maybe ill try and beat him tommorow,"
"but i dont wanna go through all that pain and sorrow,"
"i dont wanna get beat man, I'm not that good,"
"I'm a trailer park whiteboy,im not from the hood..."
well neither am I and here i stand,
ill never be as good as timberland,
but im putting into the game for what its worth,
u listen to this S***, you say its from the earth,
but me and jspec07 sooner or later are gunna retire,
but not right now, not while were on fire,
im out, im going to the mall to pick up some new attire,
peace
 
I hate errors,
they make me like feathers,
as I go outside,
in my stride,
I get scared of stuff,
even if it's a bluff,
it can be rough,
when you're cuffed,
and Dr. Seuss is tucked,
away battling through the ruck,
he doesn't give a buck,
about what happens to the duck.

Yo. Yo.
Whoo.
Poo.
Breakdown.
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Hard NIPPLES!

:| Yay. I'm done. Last line before this line being a tribute to a certain South Park episode.
 
Originally posted by DODGE the VIPER
I hate errors,
they make me like feathers,
as I go outside,
in my stride,
I get scared of stuff,
even if it's a bluff,
it can be rough,
when you're cuffed,
and Dr. Seuss is tucked,
away battling through the ruck,
he doesn't give a buck,
about what happens to the duck.

Yo. Yo.
Whoo.
Poo.
Breakdown.
----
Hard NIPPLES!

:| Yay. I'm done. Last line before this line being a tribute to a certain South Park episode.
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Dodge, your rhymes are very bad,
did you learn how to rap from your dad?
dog, i need to teach you a lil sumthin sumthin,
you got potential, you dont wanna sound like dr, quinne,
you cant just throw out words and think they sound good,
depending what you type, you dont wanna be misunderstood,
i know yor trying real hard or maybe not,
you just need to put in more effort in order to be hot,
its not that your bad, you just need to work with what you got,
other then that, your point isnt real clear,
it makes your raps sound incinsere,
sound like your rappin while being drunk on beer,
just trying to help you out,
show me what you about,
im out,
peace
 
This freestyle thread is really crap,
It reminds me of the days of lcicking sap.
This rap wont make any sense,
Cause' I'm trying to be cool just like 50 Pence.
I don't have any natural rhythm,
It's harder to do than an algorithm.
I'm not as cool as all you ganstazz,
Nor as cool the guy named drifterzzz.
But what the heck that was really bad,
Mock me if you want and be really sad.
My days are over of showing off my bling-bling,
I'll think I'll sit here with my golden ring.
I'm going to do what everyone else has done,
Just after they've yelled or sung
Peace.

See I am a true wigga with all the cool beats and tunes. Laugh all you wont but I don't care.
 
Originally posted by ALPHA
This freestyle thread is really crap,
It reminds me of the days of lcicking sap.
This rap wont make any sense,
Cause' I'm trying to be cool just like 50 Pence.
I don't have any natural rhythm,
It's harder to do than an algorithm.
I'm not as cool as all you ganstazz,
Nor as cool the guy named drifterzzz.
But what the heck that was really bad,
Mock me if you want and be really sad.
My days are over of showing off my bling-bling,
I'll think I'll sit here with my golden ring.
I'm going to do what everyone else has done,
Just after they've yelled or sung
Peace.

See I am a true wigga with all the cool beats and tunes. Laugh all you wont but I don't care.
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More like 74 cents,
not 50 pence,
so let's all do the monkey,
yeah. Yeah, yeah,
wootzor,
bust those movezzzz,
with that big fat groooovvezzzz
Woop.
Peace, y0!
 
You're all so ****ing stupid.
****
****head
Mother****er
You're so dumb
****er
Mother****head eat **** asshole.
*****ass.

Werd holla.
 
Sup my nizza!
 
cobraboy **** ***** ****
**** ***** ******* *** ****
***** **** ***** **** *****
go suck a ****ing **** you *****
****
im out,
peace
 
Hey, you. Yeah you, I bet you swing both ways
You like a little bit of that atmosphere in San Francisco Bay
Yo, yo, yo, uh
Spilling rhyme, blowing flows, yeah, all of that
Mad tyte, and a little bit of that word they call phat
When they see you they say "Hey look! It's Pat."
Hahahahahaha, yeah, it's just like that
So get back on the bus that's gonna that you back to belzebub
 
Klos, stop, please, before you hurt yourself...
 
With karate i'll kick your ass,
from here to tienamen square.
O yea mother ****er,
I'm gonna kick you're mother f*king derear.
You broke the rules,
now I'll pull out your pubic haaaaiiiiirrrr.
Yeah, you motha ****eeeerrrrrr.
Ooooohh yeaaahh you mother ****er.

Kyle betrayed me and then he lied and tried to hide,
and I'm tide deep in side,
and you know the reason whhhyyyyy.

I'm gonna kick ya ass,
from here to right ova there.
O yea mother ****er,
I'm gonna kick your mother ****in dereaaarrr.
You broke the rules,
now I'll pull out your pubic haaaaiiiiirrrr.
Yeah, you motha ****eeeerrrrrr.
Ooooohh yeaaahh you mother ****er.

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Not quite mine but I needed to get it out of my sytem. In fact it's not even free styling...:odd:
 
*crosses fingers* I want this thread to die, it's kinda annoying...
 
Originally posted by Cobraboy
You're all so ****ing stupid.
****
****head
Mother****er
You're so dumb
****er
Mother****head eat **** asshole.
*****ass.

Werd holla.
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That just burnt every other response in this thread.;)
 
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