Now this is what I'm talking about for showing a first Video.
No wall bangs, no random stuff thrown in, no bad music.
Berny has given us all something to work on and add constructive criticism to. He's put forth effort and shown that he has some semblence of skill. He's shown good points and bad points. Which is expected in any demonstration.
So, what can I comment on? The music didn't quite fit. There were a few points where it fit perfectly though. In particular, at the end of the long back stretch as you're climbing the hill. The music tone switched at the exact time the camera switched. It made an excellent segway into the tight hairpin corner. I'd like to see more choreography similar to that in upcoming videos.
Car choice was a good one. I don't know if anyone else caught this, or would pick up on it, but picking a subtle car when learning, and as your skill improves, your car choice expresses the improvement. You've picked a car that matches your skill level. Nice move. Can you take that a step further with your next video?
Track choice was acceptable. Subtle move again here. We all just noted a poorly drifted done video on a well known track. Berny has picked a similarly well known track but has done a much smoother showing.
Driving skill. For a beginner, you showed it well. The short drifts, while not hanging it way out, showed you can drift but need practice. Everyone needs practice. You've expressed the drift, but not enough sideways. Work on controlling the drift and extending the tail further. To quote my wife "Deeper and Longer." In this showing, you've not touched one wall, or gotten off track once. Were you erring on the side of caution, or were nervous about going off? This was very close in contention with "Fast, loose lap" versus "conservative, nervous drifting"
Places to improve. Extension and length of drift, choreography and timing of music, and loosen up a bit.
Well done. For your next lap, take this to the next level.
Good luck,
AO
my brother bought the dazzle digital vid 80.. so instead of hooking it up to a camcorder or vcr, i hooked up the ps2. i believe there setting to make it better quality but then it would be like 100 mbs 
anyone know how to make better quality vids??
