"The True-Blood Racer by Pitracer100 (New Chapter 7)

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  1. Pitracer100

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    Nope.
    Might get a chapter in on Sat.
     
  2. Andy GT

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    90's NSX?
     
  3. Pitracer100

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    Nope, you guys will never guess it!
    Bringing high suspense.:)
     
  4. Irons

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    Tell me guys because I am curious...


    WHAT PART OF THIS DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND?!?
     
  5. Pitracer100

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    Hmmm..., Okay I forgot. Sorry about that Irons:guilty: I was getting caught in the moment.
    Going so crazy about thoughts in story zoned out in a Science test.:dunce::D
     
  6. SVX

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    Why did I get Facedesked?
     
  7. Irons

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    That wasn't you, that was me.
     
  8. SVX

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    Why?
     
  9. Pitracer100

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    Shifting Gears In R246


    July 16, 2005
    Later in the Day...





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    I was cruising down R246 which was one of the racing hotspots in Tokyo. When I found cars revving at the line with 5 racers I could tell they needed one more racer, so I squeezed in the grid line that was spray painted. I already knew the rules someone who won was going to get money. when the green light flashed that meant GO!! So thats what happened everybody sped off the line and my car got a extra push off the line from the oil and new exhaust pipe. I passed everyone with ease
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    My car exploded past those backseat drivers.
    Stagea Driver: Damn! That Lotus is fast!
    Celica Driver: Oh noo! I need that money for rent!:guilty:
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    Koshiko: Already first. Well lets see what this Monster can do.
    I floored it hard and the speed piled up 100, 110, 120, 124, BRAKE!!
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    I flew past the city curves, turns, and twisty swerves and came back to the long straight I craved for. Then, it started 80, 90, 100, 120, 140, 155
    I already won the race but, then that 200 M mark showed and I barely got it off the wall. After the race, the guy in the Subaru Wagon handed me 500,000 yen and he went in his trunk and got some rims and tires 19 inches to be exact he gave those to me also. He said race around here anytime and gave me his number.
    Later, in the day the cashier of the Tuning Garage said to meet him at the Driving Park at Test Course tomorrow. He said racers with the fastest laps get free cars and Yen.
    Now I can't wait!
     
  10. NP

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    Nice one. :tup:
     
  11. Irons

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    Because I was proven right on a prediction that I hoped was gonna be wrong.

    Anyway on the topic at hand, brilliant chapter, but remember, don't make him unbeatable.
     
  12. DriifterX

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    Thats a Nissan Wagon for the record...
     
  13. Pitracer100

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    I wasn't entirely sure which one it was so I took a hard stab at it.
     
  14. Pitracer100

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    Rude Awakening
    C.4
    July 17,2005
    Late at night Koshiko is sleeping in his apartment with
    his TV on some American Sitcom called Fresh Prince of Bel-Air.
    Then, the his Iphone buzzed a Japanese rock beat. He heard his phone with his television in the background blasting background audience laughter. He looked at his Caller ID it said: Mamute. Aww man! not him again it was Koshiko's uncle. Mamute was a huge gambler who drove a Sprinter Trueno special edition until he raised enough money for a BMW M Coupe 98'. Dad never really like him much even though they were fraternal twins you would never know they were brothers. [​IMG]
    I had heard he once had a GT-R! That was until a Mercedes beat him easy.
    Mamute: Hey Koshiko I need your help!
    Koshiko: Whats the trouble? (In a sleepy voice)
    Mamute: Just meet me at the Tskuba Circuit. 3:00 P.M ASAP!!
    Koshiko: Alri... BEEEEEEEEPPPPP
    He was gone. I thought about then damn! I have that race at Test Course. Oh yeah Mom always says family first. So I postponed the race for later.
    12 hours later...
    I guess there is no one who comes to Tsukuba on Mondays. I always remember Dad saying coming to Tsukuba on weekends seemed like religion. I finally saw Uncle come in his car he looked at me and looked at me and said
    Mamute: I am in a heap of trouble. I put my car up for Pinkslips... against a Ruf RGT with a Turbo 2 Stage.
    Koshiko: WHAT!!
    Mamute: He showed me this picture the Ruf





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    Mamute: There he is on the track!!

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    What the Hell!
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    Koshiko's eyes widen the Ruf driver approached the corner at 78+ MPH

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    Ambulance came rushing on scene. The ambulance say he was in critical condition. After the ambulance rushed off my uncle looked at the back of the car.
    Mamute: DAMMNNN!! Its mine though. Koshiko I want you to have it.
    What!! I asked why he talked about no presents ever for my birthday which already passed 2 months ago. I called up a tow truck guy to get the Ruf to the Tuning Garage.
    Then, I signed the paper after my uncle technically won the race.
    Thats when it hit me should I sell or keep with the Lotus​
     
  15. Pitracer100

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    Sorry for 2x post ,but 1000+ views I feel that I accomplished one of my goals. :D
     
  16. Rotary Junkie

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    Usually when a car gets wrecked badly enough to put the driver in critical condition it's bad enough to be entirely unrepairable... Just saying.

    Edit: and last I checked you can't turbo a RGT.
     
  17. Pitracer100

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    :dunce:Thanks for info RJ forgot about that and NA stage 2 if I am not mistaken.
     
  18. Pitracer100

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    Experience is simply the name we give our mistakes.:tup:
    Chapter 5
    July 18, 2005

    Koshiko is watching TV Channel 2 News 7:00 AM. A lady dressed in a blue suit was reporting " At Suzuka Circuit, many racers of Japan had lined up for a chance to get noticed by the Swift Pits Motorsports team. A USA racing team with lots of respect. Many racers now are signing up now for a opportunity of a lifetime and a nice winning purse of 2,000,000 yen! The races are in a win go on, lose go home and every race gives out 500,000 yen to the winner. This is Wendie Dang reportng from Suzuka Circuit.
    Koshiko turned off the television.

    Koshiko: This could be my big gig!
    Koshiko put on a collar shirt with his blue jeans and headed out the door.
    Just before he left he called Damion about the RUF
    Koshiko: Hello
    Damion: Is that you Koshiko?
    Koshiko: Yeah. I am about to go race at Suzuka Circuit. Did you hear about it.
    Damion: Yeah. I'll be driving a R34 with a Grayish Brown color.


    1 hour later
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    Chapter 5 continued
    Just one lap I guess.

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    NSX Driver- I really need to get a modern NSX.:guilty:
    Lexus Driver- I should never bring my girlfriend's car if I want to win some races.
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    Legacy Driver: He's fast.
    RX-7 Driver: Maybe next year.:nervous:
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    No problem here.
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    They still won't be able to catch up.
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    Haha! They don't stand a chance.​
    Please comment on story!!!
     
  19. Khartaras

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    Awesome, keep it up!
     
  20. Apok

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    He brought his girlfriends car haha ^.^
    Its a bit to soon to say but i like it so far.
    Keep up the good work!
     
  21. AtD94-[GT]

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    Nice story and good creativity:tup:.
    You should compile this story as a novel after you've finished all the chapters:D.
     
  22. Pitracer100

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    Chapter 5.5
    After I won the race, I took my victory lap around the course. Then, I got back to the pits and parked. Koshiko walked towards the collection stand for his yen. On his walk to the stands there were many racers and ricers gossiping on the cars they raced and the fastest cars at the R246. I overheard a conversation going on between a Civic driver and a Subaru WRX driver talking.
    WRX Driver: I heard there is a 69' Dodge Charger literally tearing up the streets.
    Civic Driver: Yeah, a Honda Odessey got its tire busted in the Dodge Charger pothole!
    Both drivers start laughing.
    As Koshiko finally made his way to the collection stand the cashier said
    Cashier: Here is your yen sir. Nice driving out there!
    Koshiko: Thanks!
    As Koshiko turns around and bumps into a guy who is 6'7 and has a redneck accent.
    Redneck: Your car aint :censored:!
    Koshiko: What the hell.
    Redneck: My Viper GTS could own that orange :censored:!
    Koshiko: Prove it!
    Redneck: All right then! How bout' a pinkslip race!?
    Koshiko: Deal!
    All the racers and ricers gathered around were gathered around us with amazement with my boldness.
    Redneck walks away and says
    Redneck: Leave those keys on the back tire when I get finished.
    Koshiko: Whatever.


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    Koshiko: I never knew the new GT-R was out, maybe a concept.
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    SRT4 Driver: I never get beat heads-up.:grumpy:
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    Mercedes Driver- Already passed. Why so serious?;)
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    SRT Driver- Damn!:banghead:
    Shelby Driver- Damn!:banghead:
    Koshiko- Damn!:banghead:
    Redneck- Damn!:banghead:
    Mercedes Driver- Yes!:D
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    Redneck: Damn! That orange :censored: catchin' up!
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    Koshiko: Just a bit more!
    Redneck: Oh hell no!!
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    Koshiko- Wonder where that GT-R is?
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    Koshiko- Awesome!
    Redneck-:censored:
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    Koshiko- Dammit!
    SRT4 Driver- Happy days!
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    SRT4 Driver- Hope he crashes.
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    Redneck- Go! Go! Go!
    Koshiko- Damn to wide!!
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    Koshiko- Here is my chance!!
    Redneck- Noooooo!
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    Redneck and Koshiko at same time: This is it!!
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    Koshiko- No!!!
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    Redneck- Yehahhh!!!!!
    Koshiko-:nervous:
    Koshiko drives his car for a last time around the course to pit. Then, he left his keys on the back tire.
    He walked half a mile to the exit of Suzuka. During the walk he saw his Esprit zoom by.
    Then, the Redneck came by Koshiko who was waliking on the sidewalk and said
    Redneck-That fool took my Lotus! You know what that mean.
    Koshiko- No.
    Redneck- You owe me a 4 second car.
    He sped off north.
    Koshiko- Now what??

     
  23. SVX

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    Wow! What's going to happen? But also,what does the 4 second mean? 1/4 mile?
     
  24. Prince.M5

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    Fantastic story mate!! I love it!!
     
  25. Irons

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    This sounds a wee bit familiar for some reason...

    Ah, it's probably nothing... F&F

    Well done, intense chapter. I am gonna miss that Lotus...

    However, if it was my story, then that Lotus would reappear...

    ...Indeed it would.
     
  26. AtD94-[GT]

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    Emmm.....I'm pretty sure that the SRT4 is not any Viper. It's actually SRT/10.
     
  27. Smallhorses

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    Curious as to why there's references to an SRT4 driver despite there being no Dodge Neon in the race?

    There's an SRT-10 Viper. ;)

    It's a wonder they'd let any of those drivers near a racetrack judging by the fact that no-one seemed to know what the tarmac was for! :lol:
     
  28. Apok

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    Maybe they all saw a penny or something. And have ADD at the same time.
     
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    My theory is that they probably smoked marijuana and went on a heroin binge. :lol:
     
  30. Pitracer100

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    0 to 60 in 4.0 to 4.9 seconds.
    Thanks. I wasn't to sure and I tried to post this Chapter up a long time ago but, my laptop always malfuctioned and went back to the previous page and I was scared to check because I was almost finished.:scared:
    I went off track because of the heavy Lotus and S1.(Lame Excuse:dunce:)