"The True-Blood Racer by Pitracer100 (New Chapter 7)

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  1. Pitracer100

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    Chapter 6
    Koshiko walked a quarter of a mile before finding a taxi driver in a Seat Ibiza.
    Koshiko: Taxi! Taxi!
    The taxi driver stops for Koshiko.
    Koshiko: I need to go to Yuko Drive.
    Taxi Driver: I need the fare. That will cost you 10,000 yen.
    Koshiko gives the guy the money.
    30 minutes later...
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    The Seat roams off for another customer. Koshiko walks with his head down upstairs and trips and bruises his knee.
    Koshiko: :censored:
    He hobbled up to his room and went for his computer to get on his banking site. He was dissapointed to see his balance: 1,350,000 yen or 15,000 credits.
    Koshiko needed a daily driver and he needed to pay bills.
    With only a high school diploma he didn't want to work at the local McDonalds so it was race or go lower class situation. Koshiko wasn't the one to give up easily so he went all out for his racing career now.
    He then went on autotrader.com and searched for local cars in his area
    he found these cars in his budget...
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    Toyota Levin Corolla
    160ish HP
    Power Windows
    Working A/C
    Has 21,341 miles on the engine.
    Selling for 750,000 yen.
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    Toyota Sera
    /Gullwing seats/AC/100+HP
    28,945 miles on the clock
    Running for 650,000 yen
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    Honda Integra Type R
    AC/Power Windows/Sports Tires/ 190+HP
    11,000 miles
    Selling for 900,000 yen.
    Koshiko: Oooh! I like this.
    He got the seller's number and address and it was only a few streets down from where he lived.
    Koshiko walked for about 7 minutes to the seller's house with a checkbook in his pocket.
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    There it was with it's ricer beauty. I ran up the stairs to the door of the person's house. A guy with a white and green shirt that had 'I raced on La Sarthe.'
    Koshiko: I wanted to purchase that Intergra.
    Guy: Oh, I thought you were those people who sale cookies. I hate those people!
    Koshiko: Ok:odd:. Here is a check.
    The guy accepts it with no questions. Here is the keys!
    Koshiko takes the keys and cranks up the car. It did not have the roar of the Lotus but it could get you somewhere. Koshiko looked around for traffic or police and (I did what I did to the Lotus) Koshiko floored it.​
     
  2. SVX

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    The Integra is probably the best,it looks nice as well.Keep it up!
     
  3. NP

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    I can just echo what SVX said. Nice chapter. :tup:
     
  4. SVX

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    Doesn't kinda look like a Spoon Sports car?
     
  5. NP

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    Nope, it's a Type R. If it had a black hood... :idea:
     
  6. Silver-Sylph

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    :tup:Very nice i love it keep up the good work:tup:
     
  7. DK

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    A good chapter, but you need to use commas at appropriate times. Also, no pictures of the Ibiza! :irked: I don't think Seat have dealerships in Japan...
     
  8. Pitracer100

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    Anyways, I understand what you are saying and I am trying to get a pic of every car.
    Also, I need to learn how to photoshop multiple cars in a picture.
    Can anyone help?
    It would be greatly appreciated!
     
  9. AtD94-[GT]

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    Another great chapter. Keep it dramatic!

    I can probably help...with the 'cutting' part. Other skills are still in my Photoshop learning session:D.
     
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    Chapter 7
    Koshiko was heading toward Tskuba at cruising speeds right now.
    He is in the Integra checking out the features.
    Koshiko: Hmm... It seems the guy left 2 CDs of Linkin Park in here. Oh well, his loss my gain. At least, the guy can keep his car clean.
    20 mins. later
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    Koshiko had finally made it to Tskuba and had parked. He started toward the merchandise booth for info on races.
    Clerk of the Tskuba Course: Hello, how can I help you.
    The clerk looked 20 although he was a mere 5'5 with a blue Tskuba workshirt that had the logo of Tskuba.
    Clerk: What are you driving?
    Koshiko: A Integra.
    Clerk: The best kind of ricer in my opinion.
    Koshiko: Mines too.
    Clerk: Here is your race card.
    The clerk has to get a stepstool and jump to reach the top shelf for cards. The clerk hands him a card and says
    Clerk: Your race number is 13. Also, try to impress because many Japanese recruiters are looking for new talent for the upcoming season.
    Koshiko: Thanks!
    Clerk: Next!!
    Koshiko walks away with a smile on his face and he walks around to groups talking about the the car gossip around Tokyo.
    He had heard news like
    A Subaru Driver: A M3 CSL driver beat a GT-R with 500+ HP around Twin Motegi Road Course.
    I had also heard this and thought the guy was really weird for admitting to it.
    Civic Driver: I got beat by a Honda Element on R246!
    I guess he should have never said that because now he was called the Backseat Driver of Tokyo.
    Sooner or later my race number popped up and it was time to race.
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    The crowd of 6 finally started of the line.
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    Runx Driver: C'mon man not now.
    Koshiko: Move the hell over.
    Annoncer: It seems the Integra driver is making a move on him!
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    Runx Driver: Dammit! I knew I should of bought a Honda Fit!
    Announcer: Nice move by the Integra Driver!
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    Koshiko: Now for the god ugly pickup. He really needs to turn down that country music.
    SSR Driver: (In a regular american voice) That yellow piece of rice won't pass me.
    Announcer: He has already caught up to the SSR!
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    SSR Driver: :censored:
    Koshiko: What a joke...
    Announcer: It seems rice beats steak in that battle!
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    120d Driver: He's catching up, eh.
    Koshiko: Please don't race like those guys in the back.
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    Koshiko: You let me down.
    120d Driver::censored::mad:
    Announcer: This driver is amazing!! 3 passes in one lap! The crowd goes wild!
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    Koshiko: It has been a while since I raced someone who still hasn't gave up yet.
    Silvia Driver: I give up you Son of a :censored:
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    Koshiko: He was the leader the whole time?!
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    Vitz Driver: One more curve!
    Announcer: Can the Integra take the win!?
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    Annoucer: The Vitz wins the race!
    Koshiko: You cannot be serious! He beat me?!
    Koshiko takes his silver lap and parks for pit.
    Then, when he walked over to the merchandise booth.
    Clerk: Before you take your yen you got invitations to race for 5 different tourneys.
    Koshiko: Five!!!
    Clerk: Apparently you were that good and you do notice you overtook 5 racers in 2 laps!Here are 5 envelopes of the invitations and one extra of the 500,000 yen.
    Koshiko drove his car back home.
    Koshiko: Can I get any luckier than this!:dopey:


     
  11. Apok

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    :lol:
    I have to admit that was pretty funny.
    Keep it up I am loving the story. :tup:
     
  12. DK

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    You spelt "Tsukuba" wrong...
     
  13. NP

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    Good new chapter... :tup:
     
  14. DK

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    Is this a reference to:
     
  15. Pitracer100

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    ^No.

    I wouldn't take an ideas from others GT4 stories.
    The Linkin Park came off the top of my brain.
     
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    New chapter anyone?
     
  17. DK

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    ...then =drifting24/7= may have a lawsuit case against Pitracer100. :lol: