FJ' Photo Gallery|Last GT5 Set|12/8/13

Discussion in 'GT5 Photo Mode Galleries' started by ffjjbb, Dec 16, 2012.

  1. ffjjbb

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  2. lilmann73

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    It's a cool set! I like two and five a lot, and that interior shot... :drool:
     
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    Agreed about the interior shot :drool:
     
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    Second shot speaks for itself. The DoF is about right, the tone allows the picture to portray a warm, sunset mood while at the same time, the contrasting did the shadows at just a nice level. Good job. :tup:
     
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    I'd say your best shots are number 2 and the interior shot. It's pretty good. And shot two has a good warm feel. :tup:


    As for the others, to the problem with shot 1 is that if the sky were that extreme colour and intesity the track and object would likely be more intense with colur and probably have more contrast with shadows and light. Atm it looks a little unfitting/convincing.

    Shot 3 is not bad, pretty good compo, toning is pretty good also, I think it just feels a dark overall to me which makes it appear a bit dull.

    Shot 4 the sky replacement is not bad but the ground/scenery colour toning doesn't match and the darkness of those elements looks like its been made darker to suite the sky which appear unatural looking to me. So together it doesn't seem cohesive enough.

    Shot 5 is again not too bad at all just feels a bit weirdly dark considering the over exposure of the sky.

    Sorry if that's a bit of a whack to your confidence, I just thought I'd give you some hopefully useful advice for you consider in your future works.

    Keep at it! ;)
     
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    I have nothing to add to GPR post...

    I would just say that, like yhe others, i really like your shot #2.
     
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    Quite like that Ruf shot FJ. Works well in an ultra portrait ratio.

    Btw, why do you have 2 threads?
     
  10. ffjjbb

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    I was trying to figure out how to change the thread title and accidently copied it:guilty:
     
  11. iNs3CuRe

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    Great start of a gallery, looking forward to your upcoming sets ;) :tup:
     
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    I reckon the last shot has promise, but only if you did some more work on the car.
     
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    Add to this comment that the colour banding needs fixing, too. :tup:
     
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    Your style of photography is astonishing. :tup:
     
  17. ffjjbb

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    Thx crow:dopey:
     
  18. NP

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    I love the car, I love the location, I love the post-editing. Perfect. :tup:
     
  19. ffjjbb

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    thx man
     
  20. ffjjbb

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    Happy New Years
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  21. lilmann73

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    I like this set! :tup: (though I think the set before was your strongest so far) The toning on your Mercedes shots are clean and well done, and I think the Bently shots are crying out for some toning, but the composition of them are great. Out of the supra shots, I think the last one is your most effective. The composition is well put together, and the toning adds a lot to it.
    Keep it up!
     
  22. NP

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    I have to agree with lilmann73. While some pictures need more work done to them in terms of toning, most of them are put together very well. I personally really like the last picture because of the composition, lighting and atmosphere. :tup:
     
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    I was entering one of the bently shots in a pmc so i wasnt allowed to edit, maybe later i will:)
     
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    Really nice improvement. Keep it up! :cheers:
     
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    I really like the dark mood of this set, but I have to say, at least the 4th picture would give a bigger impact if it was more lit/another colour. It blends to much with the background.
     
  27. ffjjbb

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    Yea i see what you mean, thx for the feedbacl
     
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    I agree with Nicknamealguem; there is some colour banding, too, but it's not distracting. Other than that, I really like the toning and the composition itself. :tup:
     
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    thx man
     
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