My new video (trailer) of V12 Vantage!!!

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Why are there big black gaps in between each shot? Doesn't look very good.

I don't know, it gives me a great feeling. Anyway, all feedbacks are welcome. I have another project so tell me what's wrong with my video, no problem ;)
 
I like. :)

I don't know, it gives me a great feeling. Anyway, all feedbacks are welcome. I have another project so tell me what's wrong with my video, no problem ;)

Don't take it to heart, nothing pleases the running man.
 
Same feedback as before. Music is too overwhelming, no theme, no seeming purpose to the video, just a bunch of GT5 replay shots put together. It's not a movie perse, just replays with a soundtrack. It's not badly done, the shots are nice, don't like the black screen pauses, but it's just another replay video.
 
Same feedback as before. Music is too overwhelming, no theme, no seeming purpose to the video, just a bunch of GT5 replay shots put together. It's not a movie perse, just replays with a soundtrack. It's not badly done, the shots are nice, don't like the black screen pauses, but it's just another replay video.

Thanks. I'll do better even if my next video is... Special ! (Lol) but this video has no purpose it's normal, I'm not doing a marketing video lol, this video is only for fun and for the eyes pleasure!
 
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I have the project in my head and a big idea for the police chase video. But i steel need 10 more persons. So who will be up?
 
I have the project in my head and a big idea for the police chase video. But i steel need 10 more persons. So who will be up?


I'm up. I love cops and robbers style stuff.
 
Music seems a bit too loud.
The tempo of the music does not fit the pacing of the video.
The black screens do no good.
Too many scenes seem a little too bland to justify their inclusion.
Don't bother including text unless it fits in, in this case it doesn't, especially not visually.
The jagged interior textures are far too exposed if you intend to showcase the car in a positive light.

Aside from that it has a couple of great moments that work really well. Overall 3/10.
 
Music seems a bit too loud.
The tempo of the music does not fit the pacing of the video.
The black screens do no good.
Too many scenes seem a little too bland to justify their inclusion.
Don't bother including text unless it fits in, in this case it doesn't, especially not visually.
The jagged interior textures are far too exposed if you intend to showcase the car in a positive light.

Aside from that it has a couple of great moments that work really well. Overall 3/10.

Thanks lol, you're really an expert ;) . So next time, you'll be mu judge :). Or do you want to join me for my next project?
 
If you're going to use music like that, make it (find a song that will) flow with the video. During the black screens, the music will slow down and get quiet and pick up the pace in sync with the video. Other than that, good work. :)👍

Turn10 does this with their car trailers.
Example


Probably not the best example but hopefully you get what I mean. 👍
 
Eks
If you're going to use music like that, make it (find a song that will) flow with the video. During the black screens, the music will slow down and get quiet and pick up the pace in sync with the video. Other than that, good work. :)👍

Turn10 does this with their car trailers.
Example

Probably not the best example but hopefully you get what I mean. 👍

Yes ok thanks. But my next project is quiet special. It's about police chase. Do you want to join my work? I need 9 other persons...
 
Thanks. I don't need vids. I'll do them alone. I only want some persons to particip in my room and do the scenario I want with all the cops and two racers ( I won't tell more, it will be a surprise ;) ) it will take place the thursday, friday, saturday or sunday so it's ok o think ;)
 
You really need to lock down your dates man, not everyone is free over a four day period and can tell you if they're available.

Locking down a date allows people to truthfully tell you if they're available.
 
You really need to lock down your dates man, not everyone is free over a four day period and can tell you if they're available.

Locking down a date allows people to truthfully tell you if they're available.

Okay. But isn't four days period enough? Please, you're all the actors of my work, you'll all become stars!!! ( lol ) . Really, i have an amazing scenario, and then, maybe you'll give me some ideas...
So tell me when you're free. There are some persons that are always free
 
Okay. But isn't four days period enough? Please, you're all the actors of my work, you'll all become stars!!! ( lol ) . Really, i have an amazing scenario, and then, maybe you'll give me some ideas...
So tell me when you're free. There are some persons that are always free

Not particularly. I have things to do, so if I'm committing my time to something I want to at least know what day it is.

I don't personally split hairs over what hour but some people don't want to stay in all day waiting to know what's happening.

People have work, some (like me) have uni study and others have school. Knowing what date and a rough time allows people to tell you whether they can help. If someone doesn't know they're less likely to offer help because they don't have a clue if they'll be free (or even awake).
 
Ok so tell me all, which days you can so that we can prepare ourselves. I think it's the best idea... :)
 
I'll be available Friday from 4pm-10pm. (GMT -5)
I can't 100% guarantee it though because I may be leaving early with some friends for spring break. (Woo :dopey:!)
 
Eks
I'll be available Friday from 4pm-10pm. (GMT -5)
I can't 100% guarantee it though because I may be leaving early with some friends for spring break. (Woo :dopey:!)

Even not the week end? Because for me, it's still ok. So everyone 4pm-10pm?
 
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