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- Veigy Foncenex
- stylel-soheib
Very cool, nice work! 👍
Why are there big black gaps in between each shot? Doesn't look very good.
Why are there big black gaps in between each shot? Doesn't look very good.
I don't know, it gives me a great feeling. Anyway, all feedbacks are welcome. I have another project so tell me what's wrong with my video, no problem![]()
I like.
Don't take it to heart, nothing pleases the running man.
Strange, I could have sworn I simply asked a question and gave constructive criticism.
Same feedback as before. Music is too overwhelming, no theme, no seeming purpose to the video, just a bunch of GT5 replay shots put together. It's not a movie perse, just replays with a soundtrack. It's not badly done, the shots are nice, don't like the black screen pauses, but it's just another replay video.
I have the project in my head and a big idea for the police chase video. But i steel need 10 more persons. So who will be up?
I'm up. I love cops and robbers style stuff.
Ok so be ready for next saturday and sunday![]()
Music seems a bit too loud.
The tempo of the music does not fit the pacing of the video.
The black screens do no good.
Too many scenes seem a little too bland to justify their inclusion.
Don't bother including text unless it fits in, in this case it doesn't, especially not visually.
The jagged interior textures are far too exposed if you intend to showcase the car in a positive light.
Aside from that it has a couple of great moments that work really well. Overall 3/10.
If you're going to use music like that, make it (find a song that will) flow with the video. During the black screens, the music will slow down and get quiet and pick up the pace in sync with the video. Other than that, good work.👍
Turn10 does this with their car trailers.
Example
Probably not the best example but hopefully you get what I mean. 👍
Yes ok thanks. But my next project is quiet special. It's about police chase. Do you want to join my work? I need 9 other persons...
Thanks lol, you're really an expert. So next time, you'll be mu judge
. Or do you want to join me for my next project?
You really need to lock down your dates man, not everyone is free over a four day period and can tell you if they're available.
Locking down a date allows people to truthfully tell you if they're available.
Okay. But isn't four days period enough? Please, you're all the actors of my work, you'll all become stars!!! ( lol ) . Really, i have an amazing scenario, and then, maybe you'll give me some ideas...
So tell me when you're free. There are some persons that are always free
I'll be available Friday from 4pm-10pm. (GMT -5)
I can't 100% guarantee it though because I may be leaving early with some friends for spring break. (Woo!)