Ok once again I'll take an ALPHA aproach to these but it won't be as good probably.
This goes for anyone doing these vectors but anywhere where there is parting lines like on the door if you add a little white strip it will pop that parting line out and make it look more realistic and done.
Hopefully you all can follow my directions because I'm to lazy to do a skematic like Alpha
Originally posted by donbenni
Donbenni that's a nice Audi there.
-If you add in the rest of the hood lines between the headlights it will look a bit more realistic and finished. The grill seems to be "floating" and the red part of the hood seem unfinished it might look better if some reflection or highlights are add??
-Offset that highlight line or streak line that goes from the glass on to the roof just a smuge and it will make the body look more separate from the glass.
-The bottom line on the right air intake is a little curved verus the straiter line on the left, can that be fixed to match better?
-Have everything under the right headlight shift forward more to show the bumper a little more because it looks like from the left headlight there should be a little bump.
-That curve to the bottom of the red part of the hood looks crooked or it curves up on the right a little too much.
-The slant line to the top of the right headlight could be a bit higher on the right where it goes toward the fender.
-The hood/fender line on the right seems a little off, more of a sharp curve towards the headlight.
-The rear fender as the inside curve of the wheel opening comes toward you it disapears into the line on top of that, might need to be more of a parallel line and then graduate into the other line lower towards the side skirt of the car. Or more like that front wheel opening?
The wheels are great and everything else looks good.
Originally posted by Crayola
I'd agree a moving car is a lot hard and for this I give you credit.
-If you look at the side skirt where the top edge meets the bottom edge of the door that line pops out and you clearly see it's a separation of panels so if you put in a white strip like that with the black line in the door parting lines it will help make the car look more realistic.
-Around the glass putting that white line in might help make a separation between the glass and the body too.
-Where the glass and the rear engine cover meet it looks weird? The line from the glass goes straight into a parting line for the hood and if I remember the hood is at a little different angle than the glass line? No?
-The two wings look like they don't have enough detail in them or maybe the shadows aren't working that well? The arms to the top spoiler look flat they don't seem to have the feeling of thickness to them.
-The crease line to the right side of the license plate opening seems a little far over if you look at the end of the tail light on the left the left crease line to the license plate holder is a little after that. So for the right it would either line up with the beginning of the tail light or a little before it.
-There seems to be a little bump where the beginning of the front pillar and the roof meet up. Also the on the right back edge of the roof and glass meet.
-The black part of the wheels where it touches the rim edge could be more parallel even though the car is moving. May be also make circular lines and fade the "spoke" lines to show the wheels in movement?
I think that's about all that's needed?
Originally posted by under18carbon
I think ALPHA got most of this one but from the windshield forward the whole thing seems to be shifting to the left. The edge of the hood is not parellel to the windshield lines. Is this more the way the pic was taken? like a fisheye lens?
Originally posted by Mister E
Finally Mister E... It's been looking good, I've been seeing the progress...
I'm not sure how the photo is but it seems like the seat area and the windshield area are a bit "blocky" it just looks like shapes more than shading. Example that front fender is great it looks so real. The headlights too, speaking of the headlights... when comparing the headlights to the body work, the body seems to not look as real. The white line I was talking about might help this.
Ok, that's it... I'm done... hope you guys don't get too mad at me as well as making stupid useless comments.
Nick 👍
BTW: feel free to disect my drawing if you want I'm sure it has many more problems than these. I just won't draw it over
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- Yea, I'm getting tired of criticising because honestly it's really hard. You've got to be hard on yourself and say that something is bad or good. Believe it or not but I don't feel very happy about the comments I've been making. I feel so guilty because nobody comes along and laughs at me and goes "You suck big time ALPHAgigo c00n!"
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