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- Musical_Artist
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I quite like it. The only issues with it is that it is too tilted.

Z-Legacy w/ quote by Musical_Artist, on Flickr
6.5. The left side is fine, but the transition from left to right could have been smoother, and the contrast on the right is too harsh.[/url]![]()
6.5. The left side is fine, but the transition from left to right could have been smoother, and the contrast on the right is too harsh.
What I'm looking to get critiqued with mine is what I could've done differently when I edited it, and everything except the angle/composition:
Original:
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Edited:
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Notice the added blurring of the crowd and background.
Second pic: Too dark, and what's about the mysterious vapour in front of the car? Also needs injection of extra 'sense of motion' by setting a shorter shutter speed. Car should placed bigger so that it becomes the main subject in the photo. 4/10.
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Exceptional..The second pic is just stunning... No need for futher comments....10/10
Autodromo Nazionale Monza_5 by KimoKiller200, on Flickr
This picture brings me back to the muscle car days and it truly shows that, so i give it a 7.5. Nice composition!Although i would've wanted to feel a sense of speed and movement. Overall good job.
Heres mine. What do you think?
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7/10 kinda boring.
8.5/10 Good, needs some darkening however.
9.5/10 Very good, has an artistic value to it in a way.
8/10 again, has some brightening issues.
8.5/10 good use of B&W.
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8/10. I like the red brake discs glowing. Well done.
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Trial Mountain Circuit by jParmi, on Flickr
This photo I can sadly not praise as much as the previous. To me, it feels a bit a bit of a mess, with no clear focus (even despite the fact the car is in your face). The lack of any sort of drama or sense of motion in the still knocks it down even a few more pegs, but keep working, I know you can perfect it! 4/10