GTracer98's gallery: 30/11/13 - Focus WRC 02

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What do I have to improve?


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Thanks for advice, I'm reading leeislee's great composition guide, later I'll do some new shots trying to use new angles and improving the composition.
 
Very great work on this Mazda set, nice choice of angles especially.
My fav' is the second one, love its composition.
 
Last shot is really nice.
Some of them are a bit too overexposed in areas, for example the second to last picture is rather bright for me. Otherwise, nice set of pictures. :P
 

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I'm a fan of the second image. Even though the composition is quite simple, the background adds to the atmosphere quite well. 👍
 
Why are your photos so big!!? :nervous: It took me 5 minutes to load this page. :(

Please resize to 800x450 / 640x360 👍

Anyway, your photos are pretty medicore I would say, but in a polite manner! :D

I think what you should do to give your static shots some "pop" is bring down your aperture to f2.0-4.0 and give your background some nice bokeh and so we know where we are supposed to focus. Having a clearer depth of field helps.

I also think, try messing around with some different angles. Most of these are pretty "safe".

Your learning fast though, keep up the good work! 👍
 
oh, 2 last updates are stunning!
Great photos, GTracer98.
Especially I like 3 last photos, gorgeous light 👍.
 
I would say that's a vast improvement. 👍 Shot 6 has a sense of speed, and a very realstic angle I'd say too. :D
 
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