Ouch. In 10 years of gaming, I've never broke a disk or corrupted a file. I'll consider myself lucky.
Am I really that predictable?I was wondering whether you would actually post that image here or link it.
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There's not enough to actually make a tangible atmosphere and the dialogue is somewhat awkward. You need more exposition between the speaking parts and the story is progressing far too quickly with no regards pacing.
Seeing as how pre-reader has a Sonic emblem for his avatar, and the Sonic fanbase isn't exactly known for its top-tier writing, I think I know why this has slipped past your pre-reader. The pictures are a nice touch, but if you want to make this a proper story you're going to need to focus on the writing aspect more.
You need more exposition between the speaking parts and the story is progressing far too quickly with no regards pacing.
Seeing as how pre-reader has a Sonic emblem for his avatar, and the Sonic fanbase isn't exactly known for its top-tier writing, I think I know why this has slipped past your pre-reader.
Seeing as how pre-reader has a Sonic emblem for his avatar, and the Sonic fanbase isn't exactly known for its top-tier writing, I think I know why this has slipped past your pre-reader.
the Sonic fanbase isn't exactly known for its top-tier writing, I think I know why this has slipped past your pre-reader.
I think I know why this has slipped past your pre-reader.
I think I know why
I really want to make something special for our community.
So. Come on, PM me your Ponysonas/OC's and I'll make a group pic for our thread.
One user may PM me 1 pony.
If you can't draw you can use the generator
You can draw head only, if you can't draw body.
Please color, or name the colors.
Name the pony.
Please no Alicorns or hybrids/aliens/weird creatures.
the dead line is 10th september.
Dude, that's what you've been working on for the past, hell, two weeks?
Why didn't you just say so from the start?
I don't think so. I truly, honestly don't.Because it was irrelevant, for this place at least.
unit-one, I took care of it.
Am I really that predictable?
Edit: Okay... the thing I quoted has vanished...
Edit 2: OH GAWD. 54774.
EDIT: That Canterlot screenshot holds alot of interesting stuff. Like chimera for instance

Because it was irrelevant, for this place at least.
It's a fantastic story. Seriously, that guy is a genius =)
It's long too. And it has a great plot
Also, this Akira situation is confusing me immensely...so back to DA I go...